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Àâòîð
Òåìà: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 07.02.2017 22:32 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


1.
In opened skies
I see all my mistakes,
Your loving eyes
So bloodshot on your face.
I'll laying my own road
Through world of any pain,
It's all that I was told,
Don't lean on me and stay.

Horus:
Just forget my hand,
And drowning in the darkness!
Believe, I can't
Escape from my own mindless.
In this lost world,
I'll be one hope to helpless,
And here so cold...
Believe, I can't escape this.

2.
Under the starry skies,
I stand alone and pray,
Through all this lies
Will come new darkest day.
I can't save hopeless world,
And known, what I will die,
I on the edge of board,
And gulf wait. Goodbye!

Horus:
Just forget my hand,
And drowning in the darkness!
Believe, I can't
Escape from my own mindless.
In this lost world,
I'll be one hope to helpless,
And here so cold...
Believe, I can't escape this. [2x]
Ôèë
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 05:49 
Êîëõîç Áîëüøîå Äûøëî
Êóâàëäîìåòð. Íàêîâàëüíÿ. Íåðâíàÿ ñèñòåìà

Ïóøêåí áû òàê íå ñìîã
>×åëî-ýòî ëîá.....
)))))) Ãûûûûû... îõ óæ ìíå ýòî äîìîðîùåííûå ãðàìîòåè!!!!!)))))))
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 15:56 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Godunov ,
Åñëè á ó òåáÿ áûë àäðåñ Ëîñ-Àíæåëîñ, ÿ áû òåáÿ ïîíÿë. Ïîýòîìó, òîæå ñàìîå, íî êèðèëèöåé.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 19:54 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


>Godunov ,
>Åñëè á ó òåáÿ áûë àäðåñ Ëîñ-Àíæåëîñ, ÿ áû òåáÿ ïîíÿë. Ïîýòîìó, òîæå ñàìîå, íî êèðèëèöåé.

Ïåðåâîä:

 îòêðûòûõ íåáåñàõ
ß âèæó âñå ñâîè îøèáêè,
Òâîè ëþáèìûå ãëàçà
Òàê âîñïàëåíû íà òâî¸ì ëèöå.
ß ïðîëîæó ñâîþ ñîáñòâåííóþ äîðîãó
Ñêâîçü ìèð ñàìîé ðàçíîé áîëè,
Ýòî âñ¸, ÷òî ÿ ãîâîðèë,
Íå îïèðàéñÿ íà ìåíÿ è îñòàíüñÿ.

Ïðîñòî çàáóäü êàñàíèå ìîåé ðóêè,
È óòîíè âî òüìå!
Ïîâåðü, ÿ íå ìîãó
Ñáåæàòü îò ñâîåé ñîáñòâåííîé áåñïîëåçíîñòè.
 ýòîì ïîòåðÿííîì ìèðå,
ß áóäó åäèíñòâåííîé íàäåæäîé áåñïîìîùíûõ,
È çäåñü òàê õîëîäíî...
Ïîâåðü, ÿ íå ìîãó ñáåæàòü îò ýòîãî.

Ïîä çâ¸çäíûì íåáîì,
ß ñòîþ â îäèíî÷åñòâå è ìîëþñü,
Ñêâîçü âñþ ýòó ëîæü
Ïðèä¸ò íîâûé ò¸ìíûé äåíü.
ß íå ìîãó ñïàñòè áåçíàä¸æíûé ìèð,
È çíàþ, ÷òî ÿ óìðó,
ß íà êðàþ äîñêè,
È ïðîïàñòü æä¸ò. Ïðîùàé!

Ïðîñòî çàáóäü êàñàíèå ìîåé ðóêè,
È óòîíè âî òüìå!
Ïîâåðü, ÿ íå ìîãó
Ñáåæàòü îò ñâîåé ñîáñòâåííîé áåñïîëåçíîñòè.
 ýòîì ïîòåðÿííîì ìèðå,
ß áóäó åäèíñòâåííîé íàäåæäîé áåñïîìîùíûõ,
È çäåñü òàê õîëîäíî...
Ïîâåðü, ÿ íå ìîãó ñáåæàòü îò ýòîãî.
Ôèë
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 20:27 
Ïèòåð


îêóýííî :)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 20:28 
Ïèòåð


êñòàòè, à òû íå ìîã áû ýòî "íàïåòü" :1_6:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2017 21:13 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


>êñòàòè, à òû íå ìîã áû ýòî "íàïåòü"
Ê ñîæàëåíèþ íåò.
Ñëóøàé, åñëè åñòü ãðóïïà ó òåáÿ, òî äàâàé ñâÿæåìñÿ êàê-íèáóäü, ìîæåò îòäàì òåêñò
Ôèë
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 09.02.2017 00:18 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

>ß íà êðàþ äîñêè,
Óâû, ýòî íå ïî-ðóññêè. Èëè "ÿ ó ãðîáîâîé äîñêè" èëè "ÿ íà êðàþ".
È åñòü âîïðîñ.
>ß áóäó åäèíñòâåííîé íàäåæäîé áåñïîìîùíûõ,
Êàêèì îáðàçîì? Åñëè âñå îñòàëüíîå - áåññèëèå è íåñïîñîáíîñòü.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2017 02:12 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


>ß íà êðàþ äîñêè,
>Óâû, ýòî íå ïî-ðóññêè. Èëè "ÿ ó ãðîáîâîé äîñêè" èëè "ÿ íà êðàþ".
 ýòîé ñòðîêå ÿ èìåë ââèäó íå ãðîáîâóþ äîñêó, à äîñêó íàâèñøóþ íàä ïðîïàñòüþ, è íà íåé ñòîèò ëèðè÷åñêèé ãåðîé, à ïîä ýòîé ñàìîé äîñêîé - áåçäíà.

>ß áóäó åäèíñòâåííîé íàäåæäîé áåñïîìîùíûõ,
>Êàêèì îáðàçîì? Åñëè âñå îñòàëüíîå - áåññèëèå è íåñïîñîáíîñòü.
Òóò ïîäðàçóìåâàëîñü, ÷òî äëÿ îò÷àÿâøèõñÿ, íàäåæäîé ìîæåò ñòàòü ëþáîé, êòî èìååò õîòü ÷óòü áîëüøå ñèë äëÿ òîãî, ÷òîáû áîðîòüñÿ ñ ïðîáëåìàìè, èç-çà êîòîðûõ íåêîòîðûå ñâîäÿò ñ÷¸òû ñ æèçíüþ.
Ôèë
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2017 03:38 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Godunov ,
Âîò êîãäà òû îáúÿñíèë, âñ¸ ñòàëî ïîíÿòíî. Òû áóäåøü ýòî äåëàòü ïîä êàæäûì ñòèõîì?
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2017 14:26 



>>>Â ýòîé ñòðîêå ÿ èìåë - ââeäó
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2017 16:22 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


>Godunov ,
>Âîò êîãäà òû îáúÿñíèë, âñ¸ ñòàëî ïîíÿòíî. Òû áóäåøü ýòî äåëàòü ïîä êàæäûì ñòèõîì?
Åñëè ýòî íåîáõîäèìî
Ôèë
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Believe
Âðåìÿ: 11.02.2017 16:24 
Ñàíêò Ïèòåðáóðã


>Îäíîìó ìíå êàæåòñÿ, ÷òî Ïàøêåò çàêîí÷èë êóðñû àãëèöêîãî è òåïåðü ýòî äåìîíñòðèðóåò?
Õåõ, åñëè íå ñàðêàçì, òî ïðèÿòíî))))
Ôèë
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