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Âðåìÿ: 13.05.2016 15:19 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध 
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ðàç óæ Äèòòè ñ Âèòóñîì âñïëûëè: "Cutharsis" Your god is a crooked mirror You pray that nothing's looking back But nothing holds you dear And firmly by your necks The claims of being made of clay Turned to be partly right The souls are but mud Of the foulest kind Beneath an every single grace Is hiding a dirty little sick wreck As soon I realized that none of worth's retained I simply poured my heart and saw the faces melt I reached with truth to deaf and blind to make them pay For everyone is doomed to find equality in pain Lick your wounds for me So that I could Ruin you again Lick your wounds for me So that I could Ruin you again A true messiah never cums… Nor flesh of god nor blood of saints hold value by themselves There's nothing to be judged, all judgment has been made Beneath an every single grace Is hiding a dirty little sick wreck A true messiah never cums… I'll bleed the world dry, Then rape the sky And everything that dares to cry As prophesied By every scar, By every d-beat of my heart With every step With every stab With every breath I carve my way Through meat that weeps And halos holes For utter justice to be served Ohm Shivaya! Ohm Kalika! Ohm Bhairavaya namaha! Ohm Shivaya! Ohm Kalika! Ohm Bhairavaya namaha! I'll bleed the world dry, Then rape the sky And everything that dares to cry As prophesied By every scar, Until there's nothing left to right |
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Insaint
Âðåìÿ: 13.05.2016 15:20 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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îêåëëî ïåðåäóìàë è ïðîìàõíóëñî ñ íàçâàíèåì òîïà. 
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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Òåìà: Re: Insaint
Âðåìÿ: 16.05.2016 07:56 |
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ïðèâåò, Pro) ýòî òèïà ïðèãëàøåíèå?)… êàê-òî îòâûêëà ÿ ðåöêè ïèñàòü, âêóñîâùèíà ýòî âñ¸, òåì áîëåå ïî îòíîøåíèþ ê òâîèì òåêñòàì…) íî åñëè òåáå èíòåðåñíî, ïîïðîáóþ… â ïåðâîì êàòðåíå ñïîòêíóëà êîíñòðóêöèÿ âòîðîé ïîëîâèíû: … dear and firmly by … ìîæåò, ïðîùå (è çâó÷íåå) ðàçäåëèòü ïî ñòðîêàì è ñäåëàòü ÷åòâåðòóþ òèïà: no pressing on your neck - ? âî âòîðîì: çà÷åì partly , åñëè ïîòîì èäåò are but ? Êàê-òî ñòèëèñòè÷åñêè íå î÷åíü, èìõî Ñòðîêà Is hiding a dirty little sick wreck íå ïîíðàâèëàñü çâóêîì è ðèòìîì. Ìæ.á. â îçâó÷êå áóäåò îïðàâäàíî ìóçûêîé ýòî àðèòìè÷íîå âêîëà÷èâàíèå? Òîãäà ìîë÷ó… à òàê áû ÿ îñòàâèëà Is hiding a dirty wreck … ãîâîðþ æ, âêóñîâùèíà ýòî âñ¸)) A true messiah never cums … - êõì…) (ïðàâåäíûõ ãîíèòåëåé íà òåáÿ íåò â ýòîì òîïå)) íî îáðàç âïå÷àòëÿåò, äà. Nor flesh of god nor blood of saints hold value by themselves – ÿ áû ñêàçàëà Nor flesh of god nor blood of saints holds value by itself , òåì áîëåå ðàç äàëüøå èäåò There's nothing Âñ¸, ïðèäèðêè êîí÷èëèñü, äàëüøå òîëüêî ðåñïåêòû) è ïî ìåëî÷è âêóñíî ( halos holes , íàïðèìåð) è â öåëîì ñèëüíî. Âîò óìååøü òû ìîùü íàðàùèâàòü! È, êàê âûðàçèëàñü ìàäàì, çàñòàâëÿòü äóìàòü. Èáî íàä ïîñëåäíåé ñòðîêîé ìîæíî äóìàòü äî áåñêîíå÷íîñòè)) |
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Òåìà: Re: Insaint
Âðåìÿ: 16.05.2016 08:50 |
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>A true messiah never cums … - êõì…) (ïðàâåäíûõ ãîíèòåëåé íà òåáÿ íåò â ýòîì òîïå)) íî îáðàç âïå÷àòëÿåò, äà. à çà ÷òî òóò ãîíÿòü òî ? çû: ìåæäó comes è cums êîíåøíî íà ñëóõ ðàçëè÷èå êîå êàêîå åñòü. íî ýòî ñìîòðÿ êòî ïåòü áóäåò . |
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Òåìà: Re: Insaint
Âðåìÿ: 17.05.2016 14:00 |
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charybdis अ ग ा ध
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Äèò, äà òàì èìåííî a dirty/little/sick/wreck íàä îñòàëüíûì ïîäóìàþ. |
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Çàòêíèñü è ãîðè!
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