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Òåìà: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.10.2015 11:50 |
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Íà Ñèáèðñêèõ áîëîòàõ æèâó 
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Çäðàñòè! Ó âàñ òóò ñòèõè ïèøóò? Îáùàþñü ñ îäíîé èíäîíåçèéñêîé äåâóøêîé ñ öåëüþ óëó÷øèòü ìîé èíãëèø øëàíãâèò÷. Ñêîðî ó íå¸ äíþõà... ñíåã ó íàñ åù¸ íå âûïàë, òàê áû çíàë ÷òî ïîäàðèòü, è îò áåçâûõîäíîñòè ðåøèë ïåñíþ ñî÷èíèòü. Ýòî åù¸ íà÷àëî, íî êðèòèêó õîòåëîñü áû óñëûøàòü óæå ñåé÷àñ. Ïîêà òîëüêî 2 êóïëåòà(íó ìîæåò ýòî 1 êóïëåò íî äëèííûé õç) è ïðèïåâ. Ïðèïåâ Ooo Indonesian girl Ooo Beautiful how pearl Your birthday today Have fun and play Êóïëåò(û) Between us big distance But I have competence Congratulate and wish for you Life with taste of honeydew Be healthy and not disease Watch a snow and slide a skis Get in studies big progress Be the first in each contest Äàëüøå ÷òî-íèáóäü ïðî ëþáîâü, ìîðêîâü è ñáû÷ó ìå÷ò çàôèãà÷ó... íî íà ñåé÷àñ ÿ óæå èññÿê. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.10.2015 11:58 |
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Íàðìàëüíàú. Äàâàééýù¸. 
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.10.2015 14:23 |
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>Ooo Beautiful how pearl Íå ïîéäåò. Íóæíî íå how à like. |
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tandberg - ýòî ëàñêîâîå ñîëíöå â âàøåì äîìå êðóãëûé ãîä!
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.10.2015 17:41 |
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íàïèøèòå ïî ðóññêè. ðåçóëüòàò áóäåò òîò æå. | |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 03.10.2015 22:28 |
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Ooo Indonesian girl Ooo Beautiful like a pearl It's Your birthday today Have fun and play Êóïëåò(û) Between us big distance But I have competence Congratulate and wish for you Life with taste of honeydew Be healthy and not diseas ed Watch _ snow and slide on skis Get in studies big progress Be the first in each contest îñòàëüíîå òðóäíî ïðàâèòü, òàê êàê èççà ãðàììàòèêè, íàâåðíîå , ñîâñåì âûëåçåò èç âàøåãî ðèòìà. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.10.2015 16:24 |
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Íà Ñèáèðñêèõ áîëîòàõ æèâó
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Âîò ÷òî ïîëó÷àåòñÿ. Ñïàñèáî Ìàäàì Ñóçàöêà , tandberg çà ïîäñêàçêè, à Polter çà ïîääåðæêó! O-o-o Indonesian girl O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl Your birthday is today Have fun and play Between us a big distance But I have a competence Congratulate and wish for you Life with taste of honeydew Be a healthy, has no disease, See a snow and glide on skis Get in studies big progress Be the first on each contest O-o-o Indonesian girl O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl Your birthday is today Have a fun and play O-o-o Indonesian girl O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl Your birthday is today Have a fun and play I hope you will meet the love Truly love, for a lifetime one, Let your dreams will coming true, Happiness is follow you Happy birthday thousand times And I give you these rhymes Do not lose a flames of heart The party is begins... Three... two.. one... the key is to start O-o-o Indonesian girl O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl Your birthday is today Have a fun and play O-o-o Indonesian girl O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl Your birthday is today Have a fun and play À âîîáùå íå çíàþ êàê ó íèõ òàì ïåñíè ñëàãàþòñÿ... È ìíå êàæåòñÿ çäåñü åù¸ îñòàëîñü, ÷òî ïðàâèòü. Àé íèä õåëï! |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.10.2015 18:38 |
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Ìû ÿ òîëüêî ïèñàòü ïîìîãàòü ïåðåâîäèë åñëè îáåùàë òû ïèñàòü íèêàêîå íî ïðîäîëæåíèå ñîãëàñíà ñîãëàñåí à ? | |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.10.2015 20:16 |
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Íà Ñèáèðñêèõ áîëîòàõ æèâó
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Ìàäàì Ñóçàöêà , ׸?   ×òî âû èìååòå â âèäó? Íà ñòîëüêî âñ¸ ïëîõî? Èëè ÿ ÷òî-òî íå òàê ïîíÿë?
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 04.10.2015 21:40 |
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>×òî âû èìååòå â âèäó? Íà ñòîëüêî âñ¸ ïëîõî? àãà (( >Èëè ÿ ÷òî-òî íå òàê ïîíÿë? íå, íó ýòî ïðèìåðíî òàê æå çâó÷èò ïî àíãëèéñêè åñëè õî÷åøü, ÿ ìîãó òåáå íàïèñàòü ïîäñòðî÷íèê òâîåãî òåêñòà , íî ïî àíãëèéñêè, à òû óæå ñàì ðåøàé.õîòÿ, åñëè òâîÿ äåâøóêà â èíëèøå òàê æå êàê è òû, òî òîãäà ìîæåøü ïîñûëàòü â ëþáîì âèäå. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2015 08:41 |
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Íà Ñèáèðñêèõ áîëîòàõ æèâó
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Ïîëó÷èëîñü âîîáùåì âîò ÷òî: [pre] For Phamendyta O-o-o Indonesian girl. O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl. Your birthday is today Have fun and play Between us is a big distance But I have a competence Congratulate and wish for you Life with taste of honeydew Be healthy, have no disease, See white snow and ride on skis Get in studies big progress Be the first in each contest O-o-o Indonesian girl | O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl | x2 Your birthday is today | Have fun and play | I hope you will meet the love. True love, for a lifetime one. Let your dreams come true Happiness follow you Happy birthday thousand times And I'm giving you these rhymes Do not lose flames of heart Come in party, birthday starts! O-o-o Indonesian girl | O-o-o Beautiful like a pearl | x2 Your birthday is today | Have fun and play | [/pre] À âîò òàê ýòî ñåé÷àñ çâó÷èò. Çàâòðà äàðèòü. Íå äóìàþ, ÷òî óñïåþ ïåðåäåëàòü ÷òî-òî, ñåãîäíÿ ïëàíîâ ìíîãî. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2015 10:22 |
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Ëó÷øå áû âû åé ïî ðóññêè ñïåëè è îòïðàâèëè âèäåîðîëèê ñ ïåðåâîäîì â âèäå èíãëèøü òèòðîâ... ÈÌÕÎ, êîíå÷íî. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2015 12:23 |
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Íà Ñèáèðñêèõ áîëîòàõ æèâó
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Kosmo , ß ïðåñëåäîâàë äâå öåëè. Ïîçäðàâèòü. Íàïèñàòü ïåðâóþ ïåñíþ íà èíãëèøå. Íèêîãäà äî ýòîãî íå ïèñàë. È íàâåðíîå íå áóäó áîëüøå, èëè ïîêà íå áóäó. Ïîêà ÷òî óðîâåíü çíàíèé íå äîñòàòî÷íûé. Ñïàñèáî âñåì êòî ïîìîãàë. Îñîáåííî ìîåé êîëëåãå Ìàðèè, îíà âî ìíîãîì ïîäñêàçàëà êàê è ÷òî ïîïðàâèòü. Âèäåî - ÿ íå Áàíäåðîñ äëÿ ñúåìîê â îñòðîñþæåíòûõ áëîêáàñòåðàõ... è ÿ áû ñêàçàë òðèëëåðîâ. Òàê ìîæíî è Ïàøêåòà ê æèçíè âåðíóòü. |
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Òåìà: Re: English practice ñ ðóññêèì àêöåíòîì
Âðåìÿ: 16.10.2015 14:43 |
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òåêñò óæå íàìíîãî ëó÷øå â ñìûñëå ãðàììàòèêè | |
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