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Ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ

Çàäàòü íîâóþ òåìó
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 03:45 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Äàâíî õîòåë ñäåëàòü ýòó òåìó íà ðóññêîì. Âîò îðèãèíàë.

Many's the time I've been mistaken
And many times confused
Yes, and often felt forsaken
And certainly misused
But I'm all right, I'm all right
I'm just weary to my bones
Still, you don't expect to be
Bright and bon vivant
So far away from home, so far away from home

And I don't know a soul who's not been battered
I don't have a friend who feels at ease
I don't know a dream that's not been shattered
Or driven to its knees
But it's all right, it's all right
We've lived so well so long
Still, when I think of the road
We're traveling on
I wonder what went wrong
I can't help it, I wonder what went wrong

And I dreamed I was dying
And I dreamed that my soul rose unexpectedly
And looking back down at me
Smiled reassuringly
And I dreamed I was flying
And high up above my eyes could clearly see
The Statue of Liberty
Sailing away to sea
And I dreamed I was flying

We come on the ship they call the Mayflower
We come on the ship that sailed the moon
We come in the age's most uncertain hour
And sing an American tune
But it's all right, it's all right
You can't be forever blessed
Still, tomorrow's going to be another working day
And I'm trying to get some rest
That's all I'm trying to get some rest

ìóçûêà



Ìîé âàðèàíò

Àìåðèêàíñêèé íàñòðîé

Ïëûë ïî æèçíè ëåãêîé ùåïêîé,
Ñîðâàâøèìñÿ ëèñòîì,
Óìîì íå áåäåí, äóõîì êðåïêèé
 îòêðûòîì è ïðîñòîì.
È âñå áû â êàéô, âñå â êàéô,
×åðåç äåñÿòîê ëåò
Òî, âî ÷òî òàê èñòîâî âåðèë è ëþáèë
Âäðóã ïîìåíÿëî öâåò,
Âäðóã ïîìåíÿëî öâåò.

Ñòàâëþ ïàðóñ ïðîòèâ âåòðà
È áüþ ïîòîê âåñëîì,
Çíàþ, çíàþ, ãëóïî ýòî,
Íà÷íó æàëåòü ïîòîì,
È âñ¸ áû â êàéô, âñå â êàéô,
È ñäàëñÿ âåòåð, ñòèõ.
Êàê óçîð íåâåäîìûõ çíàêîâ íà ïåñêå,
Âñÿ æèçíü ñëîæèëàñü â ñòèõ,
Âñÿ æèçíü ñëîæèëàñü â ñòèõ.

À òåïåðü î ãëàâíîì.
Åñëè íåò âåðû, íåò è ñîâåñòè,
È ëåãêî âåñòè
Ê ïðîïàñòè ïîäëîñòè.
À òåïåðü î ñëàâíîì.
Ïðàâäà è âåðà – ýòî îðóæèå
Èñòèííî áîæèå,
Íî íå äîñóæèå.
À òåïåðü î ïëàâíîì.

ß êàê âñå, ÿ æåðòâà ìîäû,
Íå æèâ è íå óáèò,
Äàæå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
Çàêîâàíà â ãðàíèò,
È âñå áû â êàéô, âñå â êàéô,
Íî íàäî äàëüøå â ïóòü.
Ýòîò êåì-òî çàâåäåííûé âå÷íûé ðèòì,
Íåò âðåìåíè âçäîõíóòü,
Äà, íåò âðåìåíè âçäîõíóòü.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 06:26 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Ïðîøó ïàðäîíó çà î÷åïÿòêó.
Áîæåå è äîñóæåå.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 08:52 
Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü


Õîðîøî.
"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 22:28 
Êîëõîç Áîëüøîå Äûøëî
Êóâàëäîìåòð. Íàêîâàëüíÿ. Íåðâíàÿ ñèñòåìà

>Äàæå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
>Çàêîâàíà â ãðàíèò,

Ñòàëü, ìåäü, áåòîí.
Ãðàíèòà íèìà))))))))))
>×åëî-ýòî ëîá.....
)))))) Ãûûûûû... îõ óæ ìíå ýòî äîìîðîùåííûå ãðàìîòåè!!!!!)))))))
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 22:44 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Vitus Vitale ,
>Õîðîøî
Òû íå Ïîë Ñàéìîí, íî òîæå ñïàñèáî.
Lacoste ,
>>Äàæå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
>>Çàêîâàíà â ãðàíèò,
>Ñòàëü, ìåäü, áåòîí.
>Ãðàíèòà íèìà
Òóò âàæåí íå ñóùåñòâèòåëüíîå, à ãëàãîë.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 19:10 
Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü


>Òû íå Ïîë Ñàéìîí, íî òîæå ñïàñèáî.
Âîò õîòü ñòîé, õîòü ïàäàé :lool:
"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 19:16 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Ïàäàé.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 19:17 
Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü


>Ïàäàé.
Óïàë.
"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 19:20 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Íà äèâàí?
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 19:25 
Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü


>Íà äèâàí?
Íå ïîìíþ :lol:
"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 07.06.2014 03:54 



>Äàæå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
>Çàêîâàíà â ãðàíèò,

Îó, ïðàâäà?
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 07.06.2014 23:54 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

×òîá íå áûëî ñîìíåíèé, èç ÷åãî ñäåëàíà The Statue of Liberty,
çàìåíèì ãðàíèò íà ñòîèò .
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 09.06.2014 12:04 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Äà ÷òî æ òàêîå. Âñå ñàìîìó íàäî äåëàòü.
Íåäîñóæåå - ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå, ñ íå ïèøåòñÿ ñëèòíî.
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
Àâòîð
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Âðåìÿ: 09.06.2014 12:14 
Ìîÿ áàáóøêà õîçÿéêà
ìåêñèêàíñêîãî íàðêîêàðòåëÿ è íå õî÷åò áðàòü ìåíÿ â äåëî

>Äà ÷òî æ òàêîå. Âñå ñàìîìó íàäî äåëàòü.
>Íåäîñóæåå - ïðèëàãàòåëüíîå, ñ íå ïèøåòñÿ ñëèòíî.

Ó íèùèõ ñëóã íåò :ap:
"Ìîæåò è íå â òåìó, íî êðàñèâî"
"À íàñ÷åò ëåêñèêîíà - ñîâñåì íå â òåìó. Ëåêñèêîí ó ìåíÿ ïðèëè÷íûé"
(ñ) Aurum
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Âðåìÿ: 16.06.2014 04:14 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

Èñïðàâëåííûé ïîñëåäíèé çàïåâ.

ß, êàê è âñå, ÿ æåðòâà ìîäû,
Âñå áðîñèë è â ïîëåò,
Òóäà, ãäå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
Ñâîáîäó ðàçäàåò,
È âñå áû â êàéô, âñå â êàéô,
Äà íî÷üþ íå óñíóòü.
Ýòîò êåì-òî çàâåäåííûé âå÷íûé ðèòì,
Íåò âðåìåíè âçäîõíóòü,
Äà, íåò âðåìåíè âçäîõíóòü.

À òàê òåìà ñïåëàñü.

Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
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Âðåìÿ: 17.06.2014 03:11 



Çàêîâàë â ãðàíèò. Îòëèë ïðîñòî èç íåãî. :agree:

Âîò áû âåñü êâàðòåò ïîñëóøàòü....
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Âðåìÿ: 19.06.2014 14:28 
Ëåíèíãðàä
àê. ãèò.

>ß, êàê è âñå, ÿ æåðòâà ìîäû,
>Âñå áðîñèë è â ïîëåò,
>Òóäà, ãäå ñòàòóÿ Ñâîáîäû
>Ñâîáîäó ðàçäàåò,
Òóò ÿ ïðèóêðàñèë. Íå ðàçäàåò , à ïðîäàåò .
Îí ñëîâî ïðîâåðèë íà ïðî÷íîñòü è âåñ...(ñ)
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!