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Òåìà: Òåêñò ïåñíè
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Õîòåëîñü áû ÷òîáû êòî-òî íàïèñàë ëèðè÷åñêóþ ìóçûêó âîò íà ýòîò òåêñò: I am just a little doll In your hands I'm like a ball. So what reason to love truly? If you need me only when I act duly.. Don't give hope to gentle soul Not to break heart, which the still whole. Don't give warm lie and Don't promise If then it's waited by cold honest. I am just your little girl And my love my only pearl. Yes I can buy nothing on it.. But does that mean that it's really so cheap? Âîò ìîÿ ïóáëè÷íàÿ ñòðàíèöà: |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 15:54 |
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akkermanka , ñ ýòèì æåëàíèåì Âàì íà ôîðóì êîìïîçèòîðîâ. | |
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 16:03 |
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Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü
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Òýãçä íèêàêóùå)))) | |
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"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
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>Òýãçä íèêàêóùå)))) èç âñåãî ìîæíî ÷òî-òî ñäåëàòü...áûëè áû ñèñüêè äîñòîéíûå. 
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Öâåòî÷íûé ìåä, ñ ôèçèîëîãè÷åñêîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ, — ýòî ðâîòíûå ìàññû íàñåêîìûõ èç ïîëóïåðåâàðåííûõ âûäåëåíèé ïîëîâûõ îðãàíîâ ðàñòåíèé.
êàæäûé èìååò ïðàâî ðàñïîðÿæàòüñÿ ñâîåé æîïîé ïî ñâîåìó óñìîòðåíèþ(ñ) Ðàíåâñêàÿ |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 16:59 |
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ìäà------âïðî÷åì...ïåðå÷èòàë àôôòîðà íà åå ñòðàíè÷êå...- è ïîíÿë , ÷òî ñèñüêè òóò áóäóò íåäîñòàòî÷íû.  ..äëÿ 24 ëåò- óæ ñëèøêîì âñå íèêàê))
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Öâåòî÷íûé ìåä, ñ ôèçèîëîãè÷åñêîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ, — ýòî ðâîòíûå ìàññû íàñåêîìûõ èç ïîëóïåðåâàðåííûõ âûäåëåíèé ïîëîâûõ îðãàíîâ ðàñòåíèé.
êàæäûé èìååò ïðàâî ðàñïîðÿæàòüñÿ ñâîåé æîïîé ïî ñâîåìó óñìîòðåíèþ(ñ) Ðàíåâñêàÿ |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 17:20 |
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>akkermanka , ñ ýòèì æåëàíèåì Âàì íà ôîðóì êîìïîçèòîðîâ. Äà, Âû çàøëè íå ïî àäðåñó 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 18:52 |
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Èñïðàâëÿåì îøèáêè "ãðàìîòååâ" êîòîðûå ðâóòñÿ ïèñàòü íà ÿçûêå, êîòîðîãî íå çíàþò >So what is the reason to love truly? >Don't give hope to a gentle soul > (Do not) (?)Not to break heart, which the still whole (which is?) (÷òî ýòî âîîáùå ïî ðóññêè äîëæíî çíà÷èòü?)  >warm lie ò¸ïëàÿ ëîæü? ÷òî ýòî âîîáùå####òü ?  >If then it's waited by cold honest íå äàâàé ìíå ò¸ïëóþ ëîæü, åñëè çàòåì îíà îáñëóæåíà õîëîäíûé ÷åñòíûé? ??? Àâòîð âû ÷óê÷à? >And my love is my only pearl. ìîÿ ëþáîâü - ìîÿ åäèíñòâåííàÿ æåì÷óæèíà? àâòîð âû ñåðüåçíî?  Âûâîä: àâòîð, íå ïûòàéòåñü ñïðÿòàòü ñâîþ áåçäàðíîñòü çà ÿçûêîì, êîòîðîãî âû íå çíàåòå. Åäèíñòâåííîå, ÷òî âû ýòèì äîáèâàåòåñü - ïðèáàâëÿåòå ê ñâîåé áåçäàðíîñòè åùå è íåãðàìîòíîñòü Óäà÷è! |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 04.06.2014 19:15 |
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Ultralisk , çà ÷òî ÷óê÷ó îáèäåë, õàì? ×óê÷à àíãëèöêèé íå ïîíèìàé, ïåñíÿ ïîé ÷óê÷à ÿçûêà. Ïèïèӄûëãûí ûíêúàì ðýӄîêàëãûí 
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 03:07 |
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>I am just a little doll >In your hands my little balls. 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 08:52 |
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Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 03:07
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 09:14 |
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>>warm lie >ò¸ïëàÿ ëîæü? ÷òî ýòî âîîáùå####òü ýòî êîãäà äóìàþò, ÷òî àôîðèçìû èç îäíîãî ÿçûêà ìîæíî ïåðåâîäèòü íà äðóãîé äîñëîâíî è âñå ïîéìóò  >05.06.2014 03:07
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Îòøåëüíèê Ãîòàìà èçáåãàåò ïðèíèìàòü ïåòóõîâ è ñâèíåé. (ñ) Îòøåëüíèê Ãîòàìà
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:20 |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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íè÷åøíàÿ òàêàÿ ïîýòåññà. ìíå î÷åíü íðàâÿòñÿ åå ñòèõè è ãëàçà 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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íó ïðî ñòèõè ÿ êîíå÷íî çàãíóë, íî âîò ïðî ãëàçà ïðàâäà | |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:27 |
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gumgurush âñå óæå ïðîáåæàëèñü ïî ôîòêàì.....------------êàðîøàÿ äèâ÷èíà-------íî ..êàê òî ÎÍÎ-íå ÎÍÎ.....äà è ýòî..ñ âîçðàñòîì îíî ïîðòèëîñü))) |
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Öâåòî÷íûé ìåä, ñ ôèçèîëîãè÷åñêîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ, — ýòî ðâîòíûå ìàññû íàñåêîìûõ èç ïîëóïåðåâàðåííûõ âûäåëåíèé ïîëîâûõ îðãàíîâ ðàñòåíèé.
êàæäûé èìååò ïðàâî ðàñïîðÿæàòüñÿ ñâîåé æîïîé ïî ñâîåìó óñìîòðåíèþ(ñ) Ðàíåâñêàÿ |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:28 |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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 íå íó ãëàçà ó íåå ïðàâäà øèêàðíûå |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:31 |
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ìììì....âñå ðàíî íå íðà... à åùå ôîòêè åñòü? 
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Öâåòî÷íûé ìåä, ñ ôèçèîëîãè÷åñêîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ, — ýòî ðâîòíûå ìàññû íàñåêîìûõ èç ïîëóïåðåâàðåííûõ âûäåëåíèé ïîëîâûõ îðãàíîâ ðàñòåíèé.
êàæäûé èìååò ïðàâî ðàñïîðÿæàòüñÿ ñâîåé æîïîé ïî ñâîåìó óñìîòðåíèþ(ñ) Ðàíåâñêàÿ |
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îíè ñëåïÿò 
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:35 |
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ãîññññññïîäè...ãóì çàëîæíèê æåíñêèõ ñîñêîâ)...- ÷òî-òî ïîäîáíîå ÿ è îæèäàë)))...íå..íîðìàëüíî....æèçíåííàÿ ôèêñàöèÿ.))..ÿ íå ïðàâ, Ãóì? | |
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Öâåòî÷íûé ìåä, ñ ôèçèîëîãè÷åñêîé òî÷êè çðåíèÿ, — ýòî ðâîòíûå ìàññû íàñåêîìûõ èç ïîëóïåðåâàðåííûõ âûäåëåíèé ïîëîâûõ îðãàíîâ ðàñòåíèé.
êàæäûé èìååò ïðàâî ðàñïîðÿæàòüñÿ ñâîåé æîïîé ïî ñâîåìó óñìîòðåíèþ(ñ) Ðàíåâñêàÿ |
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 18:39 |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>ÿ íå ïðàâ, Ãóì? ïîìîãàþ äåâî÷êå ðåàëèçîâàòüñÿ íå òîëüêî â ñòèõàõ. >akkermanka òû âèäåëà êàêîé ÿ ñîçäàë îáðàç? òî-òî ÿ ïðîôè. åñëè õî÷åøü íîðìàëüíóþ ôîòîñåññèþ - ÿ ìîãó òåáÿ ïîùåëêàòü. ó ìÿ àéôîí íîðì ôîòàåò, â íîðìàëüíûõ ðàêóðñàõ òÿ ïîôîòàòü ìîãó. ÷óâñòâåííî, êðàñèâî, ñ îãîëåííûì íåðâîì |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 19:42 |
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>ïîôîòàòü ìîãó. ÷óâñòâåííî, êðàñèâî, ñ îãîëåííûì íåðâîì Íà ôèãà íàì îãîëåííûé íåðâ? Ýòà ÷¸ âîîáùå? |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 22:21 |
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>íè÷åøíàÿ òàêàÿ ïîýòåññà. ß áû å¸ òîæå ïîêðèòèêîâàë 
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"È ñúåõàòü íà îïå÷àòêó íå ïîëó÷èòñÿ (áóêâû å è è äàëåêîâàòî äðóã îò äðóãà íà êëàâå). Ïðîñòî áåçãðàìîòíîñòü àëÿ Ñèáà" (ñ) Áàòÿ
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Âðåìÿ: 05.06.2014 22:23 |
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Òåìà: Re: Òåêñò ïåñíè
Âðåìÿ: 06.06.2014 04:58 |
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>>Íà ôèãà íàì îãîëåííûé íåðâ? Ýòà ÷¸ âîîáùå? >Ýòî òî, ÷òî æèâ¸ò â øòàíàõ. È íà ôèãà ìíå åãî ôîòêà?
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Ïîñëå òîãî, êàê àìóð óøåë ïîïèñàòü çà óãîë, íåîáõîäèìîñòü â èãðå ó êëîóíà èñ÷åçëà..ñóõóì
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