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Òåìà: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 23.04.2012 23:29 
Galaxy far, far away
FORCE

Ñîáñòâåííî ýòî àäàïòàöèÿ ê àíãëèéñêîìó ðàíåå íàïèñàííîãî "Òû æäåøü..." Ïîëó÷èëîñü?

1.
Your fear is slinking by the wall…
You feel depressed…
It`s like a sound of the naked twig
About window-glass…
You can not stop it.
You`re seeing the goblet moving to the brim
And falling…

Thick carpet is absorbing wine
And keeping mind from ring of fragments…

For someone it will seem a spot of blood.


Chorus:
You`re waiting,
While in your mind creating
The days of peace,
The days of stable bases,
His face, the flowers and the child
That`s making garland for her doll…

The light of sunset is flowing down by the wall…
As someone`s blood is flowing,- that seems to you.


2.
And You are seeing,..
Like horror-dream,
But it`s reality, -
The earth is covered by a lot of black hills,
Those are the deads
Which are the food for vultures…

Between them blood
Is getting cold
That`s carried spite and wrath
Through veins not long ago…

__________

Chorus.


Pain of your heart is growing…
Light`s weakening,..
Going on wane…
You`re waiting…
It like a thread in tangled skein
Is breaking…
Night is in front of You,
Like cloted blood on carpet
And the floor…

_________


You`re waiting… ÒÛ ÆÄÅØÜ
1.
Êðàäåòñÿ ïî ñòåíå òâîé ñòðàõ.
Ñêðåáåòñÿ â ñåðäöå
Ãîëîé âåòêîé î ñòåêëî òîñêà.
Íå äîòÿíóòñÿ,-
Íà òâîèõ ãëàçàõ
Âñå áëèæå, áëèæå ê êðàþ
Äâèæåòñÿ è ïàäàåò áîêàë.

Êîâåð,
Âñå çâóêè ïîãëîùàþùèé ñîáîé,
 ñîçíàíèå íå âïóñòèò çâîí;
Îí ñîõðàíèò îñêîëêè
 èñõîäíîé ôîðìå,
Ïîãëîòèâ âèíî;
Âïèòàâ åãî
Ïóøèñòîé, äëèííîþ âîðñîé.

Êîìó-òî, ìíîãî äíåé ñïóñòÿ,
Ïîêàæåòñÿ ÷òî ýòî êðîâü.


Òû æäåøü,
Ðèñóÿ â ìûñëÿõ,
Äíè ïîêîÿ,
Äíè íåçûáëåìûõ îñíîâ,
Åãî ÷åðòû,
Öâåòû,
Èãðàþùèõ â ñàäó äåòåé.
Çàêàò ñòåêàåò ïî ñòåíå,-

Êàê áóäòî ëüåòñÿ ÷üÿ-òî êðîâü,-
Òàê êàæåòñÿ òåáå.

È ïðîñòóïàåò,
Ñëîâíî ñòðàøíûé ñîí,
Íî ýòî âñå æå ÿâü,-
Çåìëÿ,
Óñåÿííàÿ ìíîæåñòâîì ÷åðíåþùèõ õîëìîâ,-
Ñòåðâÿòíèêàì
Ïîñëóæàùèå ïèùåþ òåëà.


À ìåæäó íèìè
Ëèïêèì îòñâåòîì ñòèõàåò,
Îñòûâàåò
Íåäàâíî ãíåâîì, çëîáîþ
Êèïåâøàÿ ïî æèëàì êðîâü…

È òàêæå ýòî âñå
Áåçñëåäíî èñ÷åçàåò,
Îõâàòûâàÿ ñåðäöå
Íîþùåé òîñêîé.

Òû æäåøü.
À ñâåò ñëàáååò... òàåò…

Íî÷ü âïåðåäè,

Êàê áóäòî íà êîâðå
Çàïåêøàÿñÿ êðîâü.
I`ll be back
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Òåìà: Re: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 24.04.2012 03:39 



Áàòþøêåñâåò... êòî ïîæàëîâàë :D

>Ïîëó÷èëîñü?
ïîëó÷èëîñü ïîëó÷èëîñü.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 24.04.2012 07:38 
Galaxy far, far away
FORCE

>Áàòþøêåñâåò... êòî ïîæàëîâàë
>>Ïîëó÷èëîñü?
>ïîëó÷èëîñü ïîëó÷èëîñü.

Èçäåâàèññè? :)
I`ll be back
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 24.04.2012 09:40 



>Èçäåâàèññè? :)

Íåò. ׸ò òû äîëãî íå ïîÿâëÿëñÿ.  ïîäïîëüå óø¸ë? :)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 24.04.2012 09:51 
Âëàäèìèðñêàÿ Ðóñü


Wayder, ïðèâà. Ãëàãîë see â êîíòèíèóñå óïîòðåáëÿòü êàê áû çàïðåùàåòñÿ....you see, à íå you are seeing. English rules è âñ¸ òàêîå....
"ÿ àëëåêà ëþáëþ... ïðàâèòü" (Ñ)
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Òåìà: Re: You`re waiting
Âðåìÿ: 24.04.2012 20:20 
Galaxy far, far away
FORCE

Ïðèâåò, Vitus! Ñïàñèáî çà çàìå÷àíèå.  äàííîì ñëó÷àå ïåðåäàåòñÿ ìîìåíò, â êîòîðîì âñå îáñòîÿòåëüñòâà óêàçûâàþò íà òî , ÷òî íàáëþäàåìîå îáÿçàòåëüíî çàâåðøèòñÿ îïèñàííûì äàëåå. Ïîòîìó è óïîòðåáëåí P.C. âïðî÷åì, ÷òîáû óäîâëåòâîðèòü äîòîøíûõ))) ìîæåì çàìåíèòü íà watching. Íó è íàôèã óáåðåì îïðåäåëååíûé àðòèêëü, ÷òîá íå ëîìàòü çâóêîðÿä.)))

Ñèáà, äà êàê-òî íîâîå â ïîëíîöåííûé ôîðìàò íå âûëèâàåòñÿ... Âîò âèäèøü ìîëü ñòðÿõèâàþ ñî ñòàðûõ øóá)))
À òàê... çàõîæó, ÷èòàþ, â ëàäîøè õëîïàþ...
:)
I`ll be back
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