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Òåìà: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 11:39 |
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Ñòèõ ìîåãî î÷åíü õîðîøåãî äðóãà, èíòåðåñíî âàøå ìíåíèå Ðó÷íàÿ ãðàíàòà ó ñûíà ñîëäàòà, Êàê ôàêåë ïîáåäû â ðóêàõ. Îí ñ ýòèì èãðàåò, íî íå ïîíèìàåò, ×òî ëþäÿì âíóøàåò ñòðàõ. Êðàñèâûå ïóøêè. Âîéíà íå èãðóøêè, Êàê õî÷åòñÿ íàì óáèâàòü! Êàê ìàëûå äåòè Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå Îäíàæäû ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü. Èç ãîðäîñòè íàøåé íå ñäåëàåøü êàøè. Íèêòî íå æåëàë óìåðåòü. Íî ýòè ñòàíäàðòû, êàê â äåòñòâå ãðàíàòû, Íåñóò çà ñîáîé òîëüêî ñìåðòü. |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 11:48 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò? 
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êîíöîâêà ñëàáàÿ. èìõî. â öåëîì ãóò. |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 14:53 |
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>Êàê ìàëûå äåòè >Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå >Îäíàæäû ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü Âîò ýòî êàê-òî... íå àéñ. À îñòàëüíîå íà äèâî íåïëîõî. |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 16:12 |
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Íåðåçèíîâêà ïðåïàðèðîâàííàÿ ãèòàðà 
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>Îí ñ ýòèì èãðàåò, íî íå ïîíèìàåò, ñ ÷åì ñ ýòèì? ñ "ôàêåëîì" øòîëå? à åñëè ñ ãðàíàòîé, òî ïðàâèëüíåé "îí ñ ÍÅÉ èãðàåò"... èëè óø ëóòøå íåîïðåäåë¸ííî¸-àáñòðàêòíî¸: "îí ýòèì èãðàåò" (ãðàíàòîé, êàê ôàêåëîì/ñèìâîëîì ïîáåäû), èëè êàê èíà÷å... >Êàê ìàëûå äåòè >Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå >Îäíàæäû ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü. > Ìå÷òàþò ñòðåëÿòü ìàëûå äåòè, à äÿäè ñòðåëÿþò... óöåëîì êîíñòðþöèÿ íåãðàìîøíà, òî áèøü ìûñëÿ, ÷òî "âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå, êàê ìàëûå äåòè, êîòîðûå õîòü îäíàæäû ìå÷òàëè ïîñòðåëÿòü" âûðàæåíà äîâîëüíî êðèâî.. óâû.. >Íî ýòè ñòàíäàðòû, Îòêóäà "ñòàíäàðòû" âçÿëèñü? Âåñü ïðåäûäóùèé òåêñò íå ñîäåðæèò è íàì¸êà íà ñòàíäàðòû, êàê òàêîâûå... 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 17:23 |
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>>Êàê ìàëûå äåòè >>Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå >> êîãäà-òî ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü òàê ëó÷øå âðîäå... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 17:35 |
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Íåðåçèíîâêà ïðåïàðèðîâàííàÿ ãèòàðà
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>>>Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå >>>Êàê ìàëûå äåòè >>> êîãäà-òî ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü èëè òàê... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 17:38 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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òàê ìû åãî äî ñîâåðøåíñòâà áåñïëàòíî äîâåäåì. íåêóé íåêóé... äåíüãè âïåðåä 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 17:42 |
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>íåêóé íåêóé... >äåíüãè âïåðåä 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 17:45 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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à ÷òî? îïÿòü íàõàëÿâó õîòÿò... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 18:18 |
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>îïÿòü íàõàëÿâó õîòÿò... êòî îíè? Ëþáèøü òû ãîâîðèòü çà âñåõ 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 18:41 |
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>êòî îíè? Äà áûëè òóò ñëó÷àè... Âîò íàïðèìåð, ÄèìàÁý çàõîäèë çà ïîïñîâûìè òåêñòàìè Ï-ñêîãî, òîãäà îäèí áåññâÿçíûé íàáîð Åãîð ïåðåïèñàë â íîðìàëüíûé ãîäíûé òåêñò äëÿ ïîïñû - Ï-ñêèé äàæ ñïàñèáî íå ñêàçàë... Èëè Ç-í çàïîñòèë î÷åðåäíóþ íåòëåíêó, âñå ïðèêàëûâàëèñü, òîêà Ã-ô ïî äîáðîòå äóøåâíîé ïàðó ÷åòâåðîñòèøèé ïåðåïèñàëà â ãðàìîøíîì âèäå - òàê Âèí å¸ åù¸ è îáðóãàë (òîãäà-òî âñÿ ñòàÿ íà÷àëà åãî æèâü¸ì êóøàòü)... Íó è äðóãèå ñëó÷àè íåîäíîêðàòíî ïðîèñõîäèëè.... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 18:44 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>Ïàäëà âîò ñëóøàé âàêóóìà - îí ïðàâäó ãîâîðèò... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:33 |
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>>êòî îíè? >Äà áûëè òóò ñëó÷àè... >Âîò íàïðèìåð, ÄèìàÁý çàõîäèë çà ïîïñîâûìè òåêñòàìè Ï-ñêîãî, òîãäà îäèí áåññâÿçíûé íàáîð Åãîð ïåðåïèñàë â íîðìàëüíûé ãîäíûé òåêñò äëÿ ïîïñû - Ï-ñêèé äàæ ñïàñèáî íå ñêàçàë... Èëè Ç-í çàïîñòèë î÷åðåäíóþ íåòëåíêó, âñå ïðèêàëûâàëèñü, òîêà Ã-ô ïî äîáðîòå äóøåâíîé ïàðó ÷åòâåðîñòèøèé ïåðåïèñàëà â ãðàìîøíîì âèäå - òàê Âèí å¸ åù¸ è îáðóãàë (òîãäà-òî âñÿ ñòàÿ íà÷àëà åãî æèâü¸ì êóøàòü)... >Íó è äðóãèå ñëó÷àè íåîäíîêðàòíî ïðîèñõîäèëè.... íó âîò, à òóò äðóãîé ñëó÷àé, ìíå èíòåðåñíî âàøå ìíåíèå íàñ÷¸ò îðèãèíàëüíîãî òåêñòà, äà è âïðî÷åì åñëè âû ÷òîíèáóäü ïåðåäåëàåòå íà ñâîé ëàä è ïîëó÷èööà ðåàëüíî êðóòî, òî ïî÷åìó áû è íåò? ß òàê ïîíèìàþ âàì ñàìèì ýòî â êàéô. à âàø âàðèàíò êóäàíèáóäü ïðèñòðàèâàòü ÿ íå ñîáèðàþñü, íó êàê áû òåêñò íå ìîé, äà è ìíå ñîïñíî íå çà÷åì  Åãoð , çà÷åì ãëàç ïîêðàñèë? 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:35 |
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àãà, ïîíÿë, ïîä çâåçäó, óðà òîâàðèñ÷, ëåíèí æûô 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:36 |
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>Åãoð , çà÷åì ãëàç ïîêðàñèë? Ýòî åìó êòî-òî ïîäáèë åãî... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:37 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>àãà, ïîíÿë, ïîä çâåçäó, ñàì äîãàäàëñÿ? äîãàäîñòíûé òû ÷åë
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:45 |
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>>àãà, ïîíÿë, ïîä çâåçäó, >ñàì äîãàäàëñÿ? >äîãàäîñòíûé òû ÷åë > Íå âðè, ýòî òå Àëëåê òàê çàñàíäàëèë - òû æ ñàì ïðèçíàëñÿ... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:46 |
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>ñàì äîãàäàëñÿ? ñàì 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:47 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>>ñàì äîãàäàëñÿ? >ñàì 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:50 |
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Åãoð , 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:50 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>Ïàäëà òóò êàêáý íå ôëóä, åñëè ÷å... òóò è çàáàíèòü ìîãóò... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:52 |
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Åãoð , äÿäÿ Ñòîï äîáðûé, îí ïðîñòèò 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:53 |
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Åãoð , íó õîðîøî äàâàé òèïà ìû ïî òåìå, íó êàðî÷å: âîéíà ýòî ïëîõî, äà. Ïîýòîìó ñòèõ ïðî ïëîõîå, íî è ïðî õîðîøåå, ìîë, âîåâàòü íèççÿ, íàäî æèòü â ìèðå, íó òèïà òàã
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:54 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>Åãoð , äÿäÿ Ñòîï äîáðûé, îí ïðîñòè äà, îí òåðïåëèâûé êî âñåì, êðîìå îäíîãî òîâàðèùà... íå áåäå ãîâîðèòü, êòî ýòîò òîâàðèùÚ, ñêàæó òîëüóî, ÷òî åãî íèê íà÷èíàåòñÿ íà "Îëå" è çàêàí÷èâàåòñÿ íà "ðóï"... òîêî òû íèêîìó. |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 21:58 |
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>>Åãoð , äÿäÿ Ñòîï äîáðûé, îí ïðîñòè >äà, îí òåðïåëèâûé êî âñåì, êðîìå îäíîãî òîâàðèùà... íå áåäå ãîâîðèòü, êòî ýòîò òîâàðèùÚ, ñêàæó òîëüóî, ÷òî åãî íèê íà÷èíàåòñÿ íà "Îëå" è çàêàí÷èâàåòñÿ íà "ðóï"... òîêî òû íèêîìó. ìîãèëà à òåïåðü äàâàé ïðî áàï
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:10 |
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Åãoð , âñå áàáû - ìÿñî, ñîñòîÿò îíè èç òåë
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:22 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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Ïàäëà, ñ òàêèì îòíîøåíèåì ê æåíùèíå òû âñþ æèçíü áóäåøü èõ ïîêóïàòü. | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:24 |
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>Ïàäëà, ñ òàêèì îòíîøåíèåì ê æåíùèíå òû âñþ æèçíü áóäåøü èõ ïîêóïàòü. Ñ òàêèì îòíîøåíèåì ê ìîèì ïîñòàì, òû íèêîãäà íå áóäåøü èõ ïîíèìàòü. 
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:30 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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èçâèíÿé, ÿ íå ó÷åí ïîíèìàòü õðåíü
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:33 |
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>èçâèíÿé, ÿ íå ó÷åí ïîíèìàòü õðåíü íå èçâèíÿéñÿ, ÿ ïðèâûê
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 25.11.2010 22:39 |
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Åãoð , õàðîøî Ñòîï åñëè ÷î èçâèíÿé, íå âèíîâàòàÿ ÿ, îí ñàì ïðèø¸ë(ñ) |
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Òåìà: Re: Ñòàíäàðòû
Âðåìÿ: 26.11.2010 00:46 |
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Ìîñêâà 
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Ìíå, ÷åñòíî, íå ïîêàòèëî. >Ðó÷íàÿ ãðàíàòà ó ñûíà ñîëäàòà, >Êàê ôàêåë ïîáåäû â ðóêàõ. Òî åñòü, âçîðâàëàñü?Èëè òàì ôèòèëü ãîðèò? >Êðàñèâûå ïóøêè. >Âîéíà íå èãðóøêè, >Êàê õî÷åòñÿ íàì óáèâàòü! Íàáîð ôðàç.Êòî, êîãî è çà ÷òî õî÷åò óáèòü èç êðàñèâîé ïóøêè? >Êàê ìàëûå äåòè >Âñå äÿäè íà ñâåòå >Îäíàæäû ìå÷òàëè ñòðåëÿòü. Ïðî ýòî óæå ãîâîðåíî. >Èç ãîðäîñòè íàøåé íå ñäåëàåøü êàøè. >Íèêòî íå æåëàë óìåðåòü. Îò ãîðäîñòè?Çäåñü âîîáùå î ÷¸ì ðå÷ü òî? >Íî ýòè ñòàíäàðòû, êàê â äåòñòâå ãðàíàòû, >Íåñóò çà ñîáîé òîëüêî ñìåðòü. À çäåñü? Êàêèå ñòàíäàðòû?Êîãî îíè óæå óáèëè? |
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ß ùàñ ïîáàíþ êîâðîâûì ìåòîäîì íà ìåñÿö âñåõ ëþáèòåëåé îôôòîïà ïðî áàï, à ïîòîì ÷åðåç íåäåëþ ïåðåäóìàþ, à íåäåëþ òàêè ïîëó÷èòå, ðèêîøåòîì. Ïðîøó ó÷åñòü, îáñóæäàòü ñàáæ èëè áëèçëåæàùåå. |
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