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Òåìà: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2010 16:24 |
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ßðîñëàâëü Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà  
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(I'm )crossing over my avatar You're online. (I'm )biting the wires Deadline As a mirror I watch The screen What's the last day for me to feel my sugary pain? I'm loosing the strain Your name is the pass To my brain. Lifeline's dragging as black-and-white film And I've stuck as a wasp To your (jammy) skin Wings are crumpled and the death is right here That's the last chance for me to feel (ñ) Ilyah Beloff. Translated by Tikhaya N. ..................... ß êðåùó ñâîé àâàòàð - òû online. ß êóñàþ ïðîâîäà - deàdline. ß êàê â çåðêàëî ñìîòðþ â ìîíèòîð. Äî êàêèõ æå ïðîäîëæèòñÿ ïîð Ìîÿ ñëàäêàÿ áîëü? ß òåðÿþ êîíòðîëü. Òâî¸ èìÿ – ïàðîëü Ê ìîèì ìûñëÿì. ׸ðíî-áåëîé ïë¸íêîé òÿíóòñÿ äíè. ß êàê ìóõà ê ëèïêîé ëåíòå ïðèëèï. Êðûëüÿ ñìÿòû è ãèáåëü áëèçêà. Î÷åíü ñêîðî óòèõíóòü äîëæíà Òâîÿ ñëàäêàÿ áîëü? Òû òåðÿåøü êîíòðîëü. Ìî¸ èìÿ – ïàðîëü ê Òâîèì ìûñëÿì. |
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Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2010 16:55 |
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cringecore revival 
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Áåëîéä, íà ýêñïîðò çàìàõíóëñÿ? 
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2010 17:08 |
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ßðîñëàâëü Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà
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Òèïà òîãî. Åñòü óæå íåñêîëüêî ïîçèòèâíûõ îïûòîâ â ýòîì íàïðàâëåíèè. Êàê òåêñòèê-òî? | |
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Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2010 17:24 |
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cringecore revival
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íàâñêèäêó: âûãëÿäèò, êàê ïîäñòðî÷íèê.. ðóññêèå ôðàçû àíãëèéñêèìè ñëîâüÿìè. like in the mirror òðàáëû.. ëåêñèêà, â îñíîâíîì. à ãðàììàòèêà êàãáý è â íîðìå, íî ïåðåâåäåíî ïëîõî. ìûñëèòü íàäî ïî-àíãëèéñêè.. ÿ â ýòîì óâåðåí. |
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2010 20:25 |
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Îäåññà ãèòàðà 
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äà, ìîæíî "ñúåñòü" òåêñò - â ñìûñëå ïðèäðàòüñÿ ê îáîðîòàì, ìåòàôîðàì è ïðÿìûì îáðàùåíèÿì... "ìûñëèòü íàäî ïî-àíãëèéñêè.. ÿ â ýòîì óâåðåí." - íå ìîãó íå ñîãëàñèòüñÿ ñ iveriver |
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- Çàäîëáàëè òóïèêè! - ñêàçàë îí, ðàçãîíÿÿ áóëüäîçåð.
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 06.10.2010 10:58 |
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ßðîñëàâëü Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà
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ìûñëèòü, êîíå÷íî, ñòàðàåìñÿ. Íî ðóññêèå êàêáå. | |
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Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 06.10.2010 11:00 |
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cringecore revival
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êàðî÷å.. Áåëîéä, äëÿ íîñèòåëåé ÿçûêà ýòî áóäåò çâó÷àòü ñìåøíî. ÿ àáèñíþ, êàê ñìîãó.. èáî äî ïðîôåññèîíàëèçìà â èíãëèøå ìíå äàëå÷å. ïî ïóíêòàì: 1.ïåðâîå, ÷òî áðîñèëîñü â ãëàçà - As âìåñòî like.. ýò íåïðàâèëüíî. 2. >crossing over ýòî åñëè ñ òåõíè÷åñêèì ñëîâàðèêîì ïåðåâîäèòü, ðåçóëüòàò òàêîé áóäåò. ïðîñòî êðîññèíã.. áåç âñÿêèõ îâåðîâ. ìóëüòèòðàí â ïîìîùü. 3. >biting the wires êàêèå-òî êîíêðåòíûå ïðîâîäà? íèíàäà àðòèêëÿ. 4. >As a mirror I watch >The screen è ñëåäóþùàÿ ñòðî÷êà - î÷åíü ïëîõî. âî-ïåðâûõ, îáîðîò íåïðàâèëüíûé. åñëè ïðàâèëüíî ïåðåâîäèòü, òî áóäåò òàê: I look into the monitor like in the mirror look - ïîòîìó ÷òî ñóáúåêò è îáúåêò ñðàâíåíèÿ îáúåäèíåíû îáùèì ãëàãîëîì. ýòî ó íàñ - ñìîòðåòü - øèðîêîñìûñëîâî, à â àíãëå âîò÷àò ñêðèí, íî ëóêàþò ìîíèòîð.. è çåðêàëî íå âîò÷àò  à ýòà ïîñëåäíÿÿ ñòðî÷êà.. íó êðèâàÿ.. òóò çâèíÿé.. ÿ äàæ ïåðåôðàçèðîâàòü íå çíàþ êàã. 5. >sugary pain sweet ÷åì íå óñòðîèëî? îðãàíè÷íî è âïîëíå óñòîé÷èâî, à øóãàðè ïýéí - ýòî òèïà ãëàìóðíûé áòð - íåëåïîñòü. 6. >loosing the strain ñòðýéí ïîòåðÿòü íåëüçÿ.. íó íåëüçÿ è áàñòà. control âîò ìîæíî.. è âïîëíå îïÿòü æå óñòîé÷èâîå ïåñåííîå ôðàçî÷êî àéì,ïàíèìàø, ëóçèí êàíòðîë.. âîîáùå.. ñëîæèëîñü âïå÷àòëåíèå, ÷òî ïåðåâîä÷èê âûïåíäðèòüñÿ çàõîòåë, óõîäÿ îò îáùåïðèíÿòîé èäèîìàòèêè.. ìíå êàæöÿ, íà÷èíàòü íàäî ñ èñõîäíèêà, åñëè áàíàëüíîñòè ïî-ðóññêè - áàíàëüíîñòè áóäóò è íà äðóãîì ÿçûêå.. íà÷èíàéòå äóìàòü íåòðèâèàëüíî, òàâàðåñ÷è  7. >Your name is the pass >To my brain.  òâîå èìÿ - ïðîõîä.. íó.. òû ïîíèìàåøü, äÿ? ïàññ è ïàññâîðä ýò êàãáý íå îäíî è òî æå. àðòèêëü íåïðàâèëüíûé. íàäî íåîïðåäåëåííûé. è thoughts âìåñòî ìîöãà.. ìàéíä, êàê âàðèàíò.. íî îí òîæå ãëóïîâàò. 8. >Lifeline's dragging as ëèíèÿ íå ìîæåò äðàããèòü.. íó, òî åñòü ëàéô ìîæåò òàùèòüñÿ. íî ëàéôëàéí - ýò âàùåòà ðåìåíü áåçîïàñíîñòè, òàêøî îïÿòü äðóæíûé ñìåõ â çàëå äà.. 9. >And I've stuck as a wasp >To your (jammy) skin âîòêíóëñÿ, êàê îñà â ëèïêóþ îò äæåìà êîæó.. òàðäëîë êàíåøíà.. è åùå òàêîé íþàíñèê: êîæà ïîëó÷èëàñü åñòåñòâåííî ëèïêàÿ îò âàðåíüÿ.. íó, áóäòî îíà âñåãäà òàêàÿ. â ðóññêîì âàðèàíòå òàêîé èçÿùíûé ïåðåíîñ ñ ïë¸íêè íà ëèïêóþ ëåíòó. ïåðåâîä÷èê å¸ óáèë, ïðåäâàðèòåëüíî èçíàñèëîâàâ. 10. >are crumpled and the death the íå íàäî ôñ¸.. íå ïðèíèìàéòå áëèçêî ê ñåðäöó.. äîêàïûâàòüñÿ äî íàïèñàííîãî èíîñòðàííîãî òåêñòà íàìíîãî ëåã÷å, ÷åì åãî ñîçäàâàòü, ÷òî, êîíå÷íî, íå îòìåíÿåò ëåêñè÷åñêîé êðèâèçíû. |
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Òåìà: Re: Àíãëèéñêèé âàðèàíò òåêñòèêà
Âðåìÿ: 06.10.2010 11:18 |
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ßðîñëàâëü Ãîëîñ, àêóñòè÷åñêàÿ ãèòàðà
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ÿñíî, êîëëåãà. Áóäåì ðàáîòàòü | |
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Dark voice of Angelique - êàíàë íà þ-òüþá http://www.youtube.com/user/MsOKeller Êîíöåðòû, âèäåî-êëèïû, àóäèî.
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