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Dr.ummer

Ñëóøàé ãîëîñà ïëàíåò â òèøèíå.
×òî ïðîøåï÷óò îíè, ïîâåäàé ìíå.
×òî îòêðîåòñÿ â íî÷íîé ïóñòîòå,
Êàêèå çíàêè óâèäèøü âî òüìå.

Òû, ìîé àíãåë ìåëîäèé è ñâåòà,
Çàáåðè ìî¸ òåëî è äóøó.
Ñåðäöà ñòîí â îæèäàíèè ëåòà,
Ïëàìåíè äóõ ñòðåìèòñÿ íàðóæó!

:bis:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
Êðóòî?
Î äàà!!!!!Òû ãåíèé!!
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Âñåãî ïðîãîëîñîâàëî: 14
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Í. Íîâãîðîä


>Ñëóøàé ãîëîñà ïëàíåò â òèøèíå.

Ìàðñ áàçàðèò ïî-íåìåöêè - õàëüò-õåíäåõîõ-ôîåðñññ! - è ãðåìèò âîåííûì ñíàðÿæåíèåì... Âåíåðà, øåï÷åò àéëàôôüþ - è äåëàåò ãóáàìè òèïà ïðè÷ìîêîôô, Ñàòóðí - ïî æèçíè áîëòóí, à Þïèòåð ìîë÷èò, è ÷åãî-òî òâîðèòñÿ íà í¸ì.
Àñòðîíîìû â øîêå.
(Ìåðêóðèé ïî¸ò êàê áûâøèé çÿòü Ïóãà÷åâîé -
î÷åíü âûñîêî, íî ôàëüöåòîì)
Íàäî ñòàðàòüñÿ äåëàòü õîðîøî: ó¸âî - îíî è ñàìî ïîëó÷èòñÿ!
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 20:48 
óõóõóõ, ãäå òû,
ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?

íå ãîëîñîâàë
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 20:59 
Fretlessmind
Dr.ummer

>íå ãîëîñîâàë

ïî÷åìó?
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 21:05 
Ìîñêâà
Ãèòàðà, êëàâèøè

Ïàäëà , òû ãåíèé, âíå âñÿêèõ ñîìíåíèé, ÿ ïðîãîëîñîâàë. À ïî÷åìó íåò? Ìíå âñ¸ ðàâíî, à òåáå áàëüçàì íà èçðàíåííóþ äóøó ïîýòà.
Äîðîãîé Òîâàðèù

http://www.stihi.ru/author.html?rehjd
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Í. Íîâãîðîä


Åù¸ â ïåñòíå ïîíðàâèëñÿ ñïîñîá ãîëîñîâàíèÿ - ñîâåòñêèé!
Áåçàëüòåðíàòèâíî-ïðàâèëüíûé! :girl1:
Íàäî ñòàðàòüñÿ äåëàòü õîðîøî: ó¸âî - îíî è ñàìî ïîëó÷èòñÿ!
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 21:11 
Fretlessmind
Dr.ummer

ÊÄÌ , äåðæè êðàáà :agree:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 21:54 
cringecore
revival

Ïàäëà , :lol: ææîø, áðîäÿãà :16:
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 22:03 
óõóõóõ, ãäå òû,
ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?

>>íå ãîëîñîâàë
>
>ïî÷åìó?
äëÿ òåáÿ ýòî î÷åíü âàæíî?
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 22:42 

äîáðàÿ.. äîáðàÿ Ãíåôô (ñ)

ïðîãîëîñîâàëà.. òû íåèïàööà êàêîé îôèãåíñêèé ãåíèé... :hb:
"Òðèæäû ïðîêëÿòû òå ñëàáûå, ÷üÿ íåçàùèùåííîñòü äåëàåò èõ íèçêèìè è ïîäëûìè, èáî îíè âûçûâàþò îòâðàùåíèå." (ñ)Ýíòîíè Øàíäîð Ëà Âåé
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 22:54 
óõóõóõ, ãäå òû,
ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?

ëàäíî. ïðîãîëîñóþ...
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 22:55 
óõóõóõ, ãäå òû,
ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?

ïðîãîëîñîâàë)
õî÷åøü, âñåìè ñâîèìè ìóëüòÿÿìè ïðîãîëîñóþ?
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 23:15 



>>íå ãîëîñîâàë
>
>ïî÷åìó?

:tardlol:
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 23:21 
Äàëåêî


íå ìîãó íàçâàòü Ãåíèåì ÷åëîâåêà ñ òàêèì èìåíåì...
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 23:29 
Í. Íîâãîðîä


À ïî ôîòêå íå ïîõîæå, ÷òî ñòàðûé ðàçâðàòíèê...
Íîðìàëüíûé âîîáùå ðàçâðàòíèê...
Íà âèä äàæå è íå ðàçâðàòíèê...
Êàê îáìàí÷èâà âíåøíîñòü!! :genius:
Íàäî ñòàðàòüñÿ äåëàòü õîðîøî: ó¸âî - îíî è ñàìî ïîëó÷èòñÿ!
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Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2010 23:36 



>íå ìîãó íàçâàòü Ãåíèåì ÷åëîâåêà ñ òàêèì èìåíåì...

Äèñêðèìèíàöèÿ, Ýíû÷. :smile1: :hm:
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:02 
Fretlessmind
Dr.ummer

>äëÿ òåáÿ ýòî î÷åíü âàæíî?
>

î÷åíü

Polter , à òû äåéñòâèòåëüíî â Èåðóñàëèìå?
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:03 



>
>Polter , à òû äåéñòâèòåëüíî â Èåðóñàëèìå?

Mari Anabel íå äàñò ñîâðàòü. :crazy:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:08 
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Dr.ummer

Polter , ìàíèøìà?)
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:15 



>Polter , ìàíèøìà?)

נשמע היטב

:sla:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:22 
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Dr.ummer

Polter , èâðèò ÿ íå çíàþ :yak: ïðîñòî íåìíîãî èì áàëóþñü
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:23 
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Polter , êñòàòè ìàðè àíàáåë ïåðåäàé: àò ìàòóêà â ÿôôà :ulyb:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:23 



 Ñîõíóòå òóñóåøüñÿ øòîëå? :popc:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:26 



>Polter , êñòàòè ìàðè àíàáåë ïåðåäàé: àò ìàòóêà â ÿôôà

×òî åñòü, òîãî íå îòíÿòü.
Òû êàêîãî ïîëà-òî? Èáî êîãíèòèâíûé äèññîíàíñ ñ êàðòèíêîþ. :fear:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:30 
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>Â Ñîõíóòå òóñóåøüñÿ øòîëå?

íå, ó ìåíÿ ïðîñòî ïîëíî äðóçåé è ðîäíûõ â èçðàèëå :super:


>×òî åñòü, òîãî íå îòíÿòü.
>Òû êàêîãî ïîëà-òî? Èáî êîãíèòèâíûé äèññîíàíñ ñ êàðòèíêîþ.

ß ïàñàí :4:


ï.ñ õîòÿ, æàëü ÷òî ÿ íå òà êðîøêà, ÷òî íà ôîòî, âåðíî? :ulyb:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:36 



>
>íå, ó ìåíÿ ïðîñòî ïîëíî äðóçåé è ðîäíûõ â èçðàèëå
>
>

Òîãäà ïîíÿòíî. :agree:

>
>ß ïàñàí
>
>
>ï.ñ õîòÿ, æàëü ÷òî ÿ íå òà êðîøêà, ÷òî íà ôîòî, âåðíî?

Òåáå âèäíåå. :ulyb:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:43 

ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà.

>íå ìîãó íàçâàòü Ãåíèåì ÷åëîâåêà ñ òàêèì èìåíåì...

à ÿ ñ òàêèìè ñòèõàìè...äàæå ðàäè ñò¸áà. :crazy:

åñëè áû àâòîð õîòÿ áû ïåðåâ¸ë íà ðóññêèé ÿçûê ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå "ïëàìåíè äóõ"...
Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:47 



>
>åñëè áû àâòîð õîòÿ áû ïåðåâ¸ë íà ðóññêèé ÿçûê ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå "ïëàìåíè äóõ"...

Ýòî íå ñëîâîñî÷åòàíèå, à ðèòîðè÷åñêîå âîñêëèöàíèå, ïðîñòî ïðîáåë ñëó÷àéíî ïîñòàâèë.

:ulyb:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:50 

ëåíèíãðàäñêàÿ ãèòàðà.

Íó,òàê áû è ñêàçàë ÷òî ñëó÷àéíî...îíî è ïîíÿòíî-â òàêèõ â ñòèõàõ âñ¸ ñëó÷àéíîå !
Ìàôèÿ íå ðàáîòàåò çà ÷àåâûå !...
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 00:51 



Ñëó÷àéíîñòè íå ñëó÷àéíû. :idea2:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 01:30 



>àò ìàòóêà â ÿôôà
÷àâî, ÷àâî? )))))))))))))))))))))
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Òåìà: Re: Çàöåíèòå ìîè âèðøè...!!!
Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 01:35 



>>ß ïàñàí
>>
>>
>>ï.ñ õîòÿ, æàëü ÷òî ÿ íå òà êðîøêà, ÷òî íà ôîòî, âåðíî?
>
>Òåáå âèäíåå.
ææ¸òå :lol:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 01:47 



>>àò ìàòóêà â ÿôôà
>÷àâî, ÷àâî? )))))))))))))))))))))

Òû, ãðèò, ñëàäêàÿ è êðàñèâàÿ (ïåðåâîä òåõíè÷åñêèé àka äîñëîâíûé).

:deal:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 01:51 
Fretlessmind
Dr.ummer

à èùî ÿ âîò ÷î çíàþ: ñëèõà, ýõ ìà-ãèèì ëÿ õàíóò? :super:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 01:54 



>à èùî ÿ âîò ÷î çíàþ: ñëèõà, ýõ ìà-ãèèì ëÿ õàíóò?

Áëåååàààòü... :tardlol:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 02:00 



à ìîæíî ÿ íå áóäó ñïðàøèâàòü, ÷òî ýòî çíà÷èò? :lool:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 02:01 
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Dr.ummer

Ìîæåò â ýòîé òåìå áóäåì ïèñàòü ñòèõè íà èâðèòå? :golod06:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 02:09 



>Ìîæåò â ýòîé òåìå áóäåì ïèñàòü ñòèõè íà èâðèòå?

ß íàäåþñü, â áëèæàéøåì áóäóùåì áóäåò äåìî íà èâðèòå. Íî òåêñò òàì íå ìîé, à ãèòàðèñòà.


>à ìîæíî ÿ íå áóäó ñïðàøèâàòü, ÷òî ýòî çíà÷èò?

Ýòî íå÷òî âðîäå ìàíòðû äëÿ òóðèñòà â Èçðàèëå. :crazy:
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 02:12 
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Dr.ummer

>Ýòî íå÷òî âðîäå ìàíòðû äëÿ òóðèñòà â Èçðàèëå.

îñîáåííî â 22.00 êîãäà ÷óòü ëè íå âñ¸ çàêðûòî :yak:
Pass the loser who only can talk
About what they're gonna do,
Don't you know that I walk?
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Âðåìÿ: 28.09.2010 02:14 



>
>îñîáåííî â 22.00 êîãäà ÷óòü ëè íå âñ¸ çàêðûòî, à òðóáû-òî ãîðÿò :yak:
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!