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Òåìà: Aaliyah (òåêñò)
Âðåìÿ: 23.08.2010 03:02 



"Aaliyah"(is the name of the girl)

1 verese

A long time ago
one man loved a girl,
who was like a sunshine
He dreamed every day
about A beautiful face.
And one night he got her

Brige:
why does she stay in A heart and it's such a pain

(how can you survivE it)

Everyone says that she only USED TO play

(but/she still so wanted))

Ñhorus:

Aliyah, Aliyah, Aliyah..

Don't break his world!

2 verese

Many years are gone.
Now he cares about someone,
loving her for a lifetime
But freedom way,
that is what she came.
Nobody can find her...

Brige
Ñhorus

ïîìîãèòå ïðàâèòü...íîñèòåëü ñìîòðåë,íå íàøåë íåïðàâèëüíîñòåé......íî âäðóã ÷òî -òî íå òàê.ñëîæíî.ìîæåò êàêèå ëèáî îáîðîòû èçìåíèòü.?

íàïðèìåð íàïðÿãàåò çäåñü (but/she still so wanted))???êàê áûòü?
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Òåìà: Re: Aaliyah (òåêñò)
Âðåìÿ: 23.08.2010 03:07 



åùå íå íðà ïîñòîÿííî hi she her
íå ìíîãî ëè? :-)....âîîáùåì îïûòà íåò...ñîâåòóéòå
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Òåìà: Re: Aaliyah (òåêñò)
Âðåìÿ: 23.08.2010 12:39 
Í. Íîâãîðîä


Äâå çâåçäû - ïðèâåò âàì îáåèì!
Äàâíåíüêî âàñ íå áûëî çäåñü.
Ýõ, âîò êîãäà áû ìíå àãëèööêèé ïðèãîäèëñÿ...
×åãî ÿ ñî ñâîèì õåíäå-õîõîì!
Íàäî ñòàðàòüñÿ äåëàòü õîðîøî: ó¸âî - îíî è ñàìî ïîëó÷èòñÿ!
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Òåìà: Re: Aaliyah (òåêñò)
Âðåìÿ: 23.08.2010 12:42 



À ÷òî òàêîå verese? :)
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Òåìà: Re: Aaliyah (òåêñò)
Âðåìÿ: 23.08.2010 12:45 
Ï-ñê


>À ÷òî òàêîå verese?

ß çíàþ, ß çíàþ.. Ýòî àíñàìáëü òàêîé, áåëîðóññêèé !!
8-)
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!