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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò áðÿêè, êðèêè  
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ß ÷óâñòâóþ, ÷òî ó ìåíÿ íåòó äðóãà ß ÷óâñòâóþ, ÷òî ìîé îäèí òîëüêî äðóã Ýòî òîëüêî ìîé ãîðîä, ãäå ÿ ðîäèëñÿ Êàê ÿ îäèíîêèé, ìû âìåñòå âñåãäà ß åäó ïî óëèöàì, ìû ñ íèì â êîìïàíèè Áðîæó ïî äâîðàì, îí çíàåò ìåíÿ Îí âèäèò äîáðî, âñ¸ ÷òî ÿ ñäåëàë ß íå áåñïîêîþñü, ÷òî ýòî ôèãíÿ Íåõî÷ó ÿ âîâñå çíàòü ñâîé ïîñëåäíèé äåíü Çàáåðè ìåíÿ ê ñåáå, çàáåðè ñêîðåé Íåõî÷ó ÿ âîâñå çíàòü ñâîé ïîñëåäíèé äåíü Çàáåðè ìåíÿ ê ñåáå, çàáåðè ñêîðåé Åé-åé, åé-åé Òðóäíî ïîâåðèòü òàì íèêîãî íåòó Òðóäíî ïîâåðèòü ÷òî ÿ îäèíîê Òîëüêî ëèøü ãîðîä, ÷òî ìåíÿ ëþáèò Êàê ÿ îäèíîêèé, ìû âìåñòå âñåãäà Íåõî÷ó ÿ âîâñå çíàòü ñâîé ïîñëåäíèé äåíü Çàáåðè ìåíÿ ê ñåáå, çàáåðè ñêîðåé Íåõî÷ó ÿ âîâñå çíàòü ñâîé ïîñëåäíèé äåíü Çàáåðè ìåíÿ ê ñåáå, çàáåðè ñêîðåé Åé-åé, åé-åé Î, íåò, íåò, íåò, äà, äà Ïîä öåíòðàëüíûì ìîñòîì ß ïðîëèë ñâîþ êðîâü Ïîä öåíòðàëüíûì ìîñòîì Çàáûë ñâîþ ëþáîâü Ïîä öåíòðàëüíûì ìîñòîì ß áûë â ïëåíó íóæäû Ïîä öåíòðàëüíûì ìîñòîì ß îòäàë ñâîþ æèçíü Åé-åé, åé-åé Î, íåò, íåò, íåò, äà, äà Ãäå ÿ âñåãäà! |
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“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2010 02:48 |
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Ãóãåëü ïåðåâîä÷èê? | |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2010 03:42 |
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò áðÿêè, êðèêè
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ÿ ïåðåâîä÷èê. òåêñò â îðèãèíàëå íåçàìûñëîâàòûé. ðèôìà òàì òîæå íå âåçäå. ÿ ïåðåâîäèë, ÷òîá ïåëîñü. ò.å. ïðîðèòåò äåëàë íà ðàçìåð, íà ñîçâó÷íîñòü ðèôì, ïîòîì íà òî÷íîñòü ïåðåâîäà. íî îáùèé ñìûñë ïåðåäàí. à ÷òî òåáÿ íå óñòðàèâàåò? ñêàæè, ìîæåò ïîïðàâëþ. |
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“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2010 09:12 |
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âàëèäàòîð òðåçâîñòè 
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Ñòîï îïåðåäèë, î÷åíü ïîõîæå íà ïîäñòðî÷íûé ïåðåâîä. | |
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âñ¸ ãàâíî áåñïëàòíî
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2010 21:03 |
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Ïåðåâîä êó¸âýé, èáî ñòàðàëîñü êàê ìîæíî áëèæå ê îðèãèíàëó, à ñòîèò âñå-òàêè ëèòåðàòóðíûì ïåðåâîäîì çàíèìàòüñÿ, à íå òåõíè÷åñêèì... Èñõîäèòü íàäî èç òîãî, ÷òî ÷èòàþùåìó ïîêóé, ïåðåâîä ýòî èëè îðèãèíàë, äëÿ íåãî ýòî, ïðåæäå âñåãî, òåêñò íà ðóññêîì ÿçûêå, è îí äîëæåí áûòü öåëîñòíûì è ñòèëèñòè÷åñêè ãëàäêèì (ãðàìîòíûì, ñàìî ñîáîé)... |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 15.03.2010 21:07 |
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ïëàòôîðìà Ïëàíåðíàÿ
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>Íåõî÷ó ÿ âîâñå çíàòü ñâîé ïîñëåäíèé äåíü >Çàáåðè ìåíÿ ê ñåáå, çàáåðè ñêîðåé è öåëóé ìåíÿ âåçäå, ÿ âåäü âçðîñëàÿ óæå  >Åé-åé, åé-åé |
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http://www.stihi.ru/avtor/gumgurush Ýòà áîëü, ýòîò êàéô, äàæå ýòî ãoâío – èìåíóåòñÿ ñ ãîðäîñòüþ – «æèçíü»(c)
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 16.03.2010 03:24 |
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äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò áðÿêè, êðèêè
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íäà. íàäî áûëî ñïåòü, à íå âûêëàäûâàòü òåêñò. íå ÷èòàåòñÿ ò.ê. ìîæåò êîãäà íèòü ïîëèðíó |
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Òåìà: Re: Ïîä ìîñòîì - ïåðåâîä Under The Bridge, RHCP
Âðåìÿ: 16.03.2010 08:57 |
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>íäà. íàäî áûëî ñïåòü, à íå âûêëàäûâàòü òåêñò. íå ÷èòàåòñÿ ò.ê. > >ìîæåò êîãäà íèòü ïîëèðíó ß ïåñíþ çíàþ, åñëè ÷å, òàêøòà è ñàì ñåáå ìîãó íàïåòü ) |
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