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Òåìà: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 17:40 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.  
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òîëüêî êðèê òèøèíû, òîëüêî ÿðêèé ñâåò òüìû, íàïîìèíàåò êàê ãëóïû, òå ìèìîëåòíûå äíè, êîãäà ìû áûëè æèâû, ñâåòëû, ãîðäû, ÷èñòû, ñàìîëþáèâû, èãðèâû, è íå æàëåëè ãðèâû, â äðàêå êàê ñîáàêè, âûãðûçàëè øóòëèâî, ñåðäöà ëþáèìûõ, íà çåìëþ áðîñàëè, ïëåâàëè, òîïòàëè, è ñíîâà ïîäíèìàëè, ïîíèìàëè è ïðîùàëè, òàê áûëî ñ íàìè, êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû, êîãäà òî æèâû áûëè íàìè, íî äàòó âîãíàëè â êàìåíü, ñëåçàìè çàëèëè, âûëèçàëè ãëàçàìè, çàáðîñàëè âåíêàìè, êðåñòû çàáèëè, ðàçâåðíóëèñü è çàáûëè, êîãäà òî ìû áûëè îíè, êîãäà òî îíè áûëè íàìè, êîãäà òî ìû áûëè îíè, êîãäà òî îíè áûëè íàìè.... |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:20 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò? 
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ñîðè, ÿ íèàñèëèë... | |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:24 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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îñèëèë... íå íðà.. |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:25 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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 äà òóò ïðîñòî âñå, ÷åãî îñèëèâàòü òî:)
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:26 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>äà òóò ïðîñòî âñå, ÷åãî îñèëèâàòü òî íó, ýòî ñìîòðÿ ó êîãî íà êàêóþ ñòîðîíû ÷åðåïà òàðàêàíû ïåðåïîëçëè... ìíå íàïðèìåð òÿæåëî òàêîå ÷èòàòü.. |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:27 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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íó íå íðà, òàê ìîæ êîìó äðóãîìó ïîíðà) ÿ íå ðàññòðîèëñÿ)) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:29 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>ÿ íå ðàññòðîèëñÿ)) è íå íàäî))) ó ìåíÿ âñå ðàâíî âêóñ ñòðàííûé - êëàññèêó ëþáëþ))) à ñîâðåìåííîñòü íå ïîíèìàþ, òàê ÷òî çàáåé)) |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:34 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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óõ òû ìåíÿ ñîâðåìåííîñòüþ íàçâàëè)) ïîëüùåí))))) ììì, íàäî íàâåðí ïàôîñíî êàê íèáóäü - íåïðèçíàííûé ïîýò ñîâðåìåííîñòè))) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:35 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>óõ òû ìåíÿ ñîâðåìåííîñòüþ íàçâàëè)) ïîëüùåí))))) ììì, íàäî íàâåðí ïàôîñíî êàê íèáóäü - íåïðèçíàííûé ïîýò ñîâðåìåííîñòè íó òà ïî ëþáîìó ìîëîæå Ïóøêèíà... |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:43 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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íà ïàðó ëåò 
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:48 |
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óõóõóõ, ãäå òû, ÉîæûãÚ ñ áîëîò?
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>íà ïàðó ëåò êðóòî, ìîæåò òû åùå è ó÷èëñÿ ñ íèì âìåñòå? |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 18:54 |
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Í. Íîâãîðîä
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Êàê "ïðîñòî ñòèõè" - äà - íåïðèâû÷íî. Äà ïðîñòî - íàðóøåíû ìíîãèå çàêîíû ñòèõîñëîæåíèÿ â êëàññè÷åñêîì ïîíèìàíèè ýòîãî ñëîâà. Åñëè - òåêñò ïåñíè - ïîéä¸ò âïîëíå... È áóäåò çâó÷àòü èìåííî ñîâðåìåííî. Íî â îòäåëüíûõ ñòðîêàõ, è ò.ä - åñòü è ïîýçèÿ. Íó, è êàêîå-òî íàñòðîåíèå - âûðàæåíî. |
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Íàäî ñòàðàòüñÿ äåëàòü õîðîøî: ó¸âî - îíî è ñàìî ïîëó÷èòñÿ!
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 19:33 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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shinenkov , îé ñïàñèáêè) äà ýò ïåñíÿ) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 22:30 |
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âàëèäàòîð òðåçâîñòè 
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Ïîñûë õîðîøèé, æåñòêèé. Ðåàëèçàöèÿ íåìíîãî ñòðàäàåò, ïîäïðàâèòü áû áåç óùåðáà äëÿ íàñòðîÿ è ìûñëè + ïàðó-òðîéêó êðè÷àëîê çóáîäðîáèòåëüíûõ âîòêíóòü. Äåâî÷êè áóäóò â òðóñèêè ïèñàòü, à ìàëü÷èêè ïûæèòüñÿ è âûêàçûâàòü ìóæåñòâåííîñòü. Äëÿ ïåñíè íåïëîõî, ìëèí. |
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âñ¸ ãàâíî áåñïëàòíî
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 08.02.2010 22:42 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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îïûòü äÿäåíüêà, îïûòü ) 8-) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 09.02.2010 09:39 |
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cringecore revival 
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îõ, ïëîõî. íèçÿ ñòîêà ïðèëàãàòåëüíûõ â êóïëåò ïèõàòü ìû áûëè îíè - ýòî ÷îçàíàõÚ? ïë¸õî-ïë¸õî-ïë¸õî 
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 09.02.2010 12:42 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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Íó åñëè íå ïîíÿë, íè÷åì íå ìîãó ïîìî÷ü:) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 09.02.2010 12:54 |
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cringecore revival
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Ïèðîêèíåòèê, à êòî ãîâîðèë, ÷òî ÿ íå ïîíÿë? ìûáûëèîíè - ýòî ïðîñòî íåïàðóññêå) - äàæå â êîíòåêñòå ñòîðîííåãî âîñïðèÿòèÿ è ïðîåöèðîâàíèÿ ñåáÿ/èõ(ëèðãåðîåâ) âîâíå |
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Òåìà: Re: êîãäà òî ìû áûëè æèâû
Âðåìÿ: 09.02.2010 14:33 |
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Êðàñíîäàð Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.
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íåçíàþ, êàæåòñÿ ýòî ñïîðíûé âîïðîñ) | |
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I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes I know it's everybody's sin You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫ |
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