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Ôîðóì òåêñòîâèêîâ

Çàäàòü íîâóþ òåìó
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 01:11 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

÷àñ ëóíû óæ,
ðàñöâåëà ñàêóðà,
ñåãîäíÿ íå ïüþ:)
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 01:43 
Äîëãîâïðóäûí (Ìîñêâà)


Çäðàâñòâóéòå.
Ëó÷øåå õîêêó áûëî íàïèñàíî ê ñîæàëåíèþ íå â ýòîé òåìå. Îíî áûëî íàïèñàíî ìîèì äðóãîì, âûêëàäûâàþ.

Íåò ñïîñîáà çàùèòèòüñÿ
Îò ñèãàðåò ìàðêè "Ïðèìà"
Ïðåäëîæåííûõ Îëåãîì Âàëåðüåâè÷åì.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 01:54 



:upset:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 15:06 

Òðåóãîëüíèê ̸áèóñà

Ñîöâåòèÿ òðàâ
Îïàäàþò íà çåìëþ.
Ìå÷ áåñïîùàäåí.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 15:15 




>Çäðàâñòâóéòå.
>Ëó÷øåå õîêêó áûëî íàïèñàíî ê ñîæàëåíèþ íå â ýòîé òåìå. Îíî áûëî íàïèñàíî ìîèì äðóãîì, âûêëàäûâàþ.

Ýòî íå õîêêó. Óòâåðæäåíèå òâîå â ñòèëå "ëó÷øàÿ ðûáà - ýòî ìÿñî". Òû ïðèâåë ïðîñòî ïðåäëîæåíèå ðóññêîãî ÿçûêà, ïîðóáëåííîå íà àáçàöû. :D Âîò õîêêó, êîòîðîå âûëîæèë PV, ÷óâñòâóåøü ðèòì?

>Ñîöâåòèÿ òðàâ
>Îïàäàþò íà çåìëþ.
>Ìå÷ áåñïîùàäåí.

À åñëè òû ïðîñòî ïîøóòèòü õîòåë, òàê òîæå íå ïîëó÷èëîñü. :)
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 17:35 



Íàì íå óñëûøàòü
Êëåíîâûõ ëèñòüåâ øåëåñò
Òåïåðü äî ëåòà
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 17:40 



Âíîâü ïîñëûøèòüñÿ
Ëèñòüåâ êëåíîâûõ øåëåñò
Áóäóùèì ëåòîì
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 20:16 



Êàê-òî òðåâîæíî:
Ïî óòðó äûì íàä âîäîé,
×òî òðàíñöåíäåíòíîñòü...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 18.09.2008 21:09 



 õèæèíå òèõî.
Äûì íàä âîäîé ïî óòðó -
Êàê òðàíñöåíäåíòíîñòü...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 19.09.2008 17:44 



Âîò áåëûé ãîëóáü
Ñ ðàçìàõó ïðèçåìëèëñÿ
Íà ïîäîêîííèê...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:06 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

>Âîò áåëûé ãîëóáü
>Ñ ðàçìàõó ïðèçåìëèëñÿ
>Íà ïîäîêîííèê...

ãîòîâü ñêîâîðîäêó
ïàðõàåò óæèí íà áàëêîíå
áûñòðåå...)))))
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:18 



Ïòèöó îáèäåòü -
Çíà÷èò ñåáÿ ïîòåðÿòü.
Âîëüíîìó - âîëÿ...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 02:35 



Ñ ïñèõîäåëèåé
Òàê ïîðà çàâÿçûâàòü -
Ìîñê çàñûõàåò...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 20.09.2008 12:04 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

ãëóïûé âîèí,
ðæàâîå ëåçâèå ñïèò,
áåñïå÷íîñòü
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 02:33 



Âîèíîâ ÷óâñòâà
Îñòðû, ñëîâíî êàòàíà -
Ìèã ïåðåä áèòâîé...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 02:55 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

êðîâü è ëóíà,
ïàäåíüå áåçìîëâíî,
ñïîòêíóëñÿ
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 03:06 



Íå õî÷ó ïîêàçàòüñÿ ñíîáîì, ïðîñòî åñëè êîìó-òî ýòî âàæíî, íî îí íå â êóðñàõ - õîêêó ïèøåòñÿ â îïðåäåëåííîé ñëîãîâîé ñòðóêòóðå: 5-7-5.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 03:08 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Poltergeist, ñòðóêòóðà ìîæåò æå èíîãäà íàðóøàòüñÿ ???
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 03:21 



ß ïîâòîðþñü - åñëè âäðóã êîìó-òî ýòî âàæíî, íî îí íå çíàë ) Îòâåò íà âîïðîñ: â ðàìêàõ ñòåáà ìîæåò íàðóøàòüñÿ âñ¸, ÷òî óãîäíî... Ïî èäåå æå 5-7-5=õàéêó... Ñîîòâåòñòâåííî òî, ÷òî íå 5-7-5 õàéêó íàçûâàòüñÿ íå ìîæåò... Ó ÿïîíöåâ âñ¸ î÷åíü ÷åòêî è ñâÿçü ñ òðàäèöèåé - æåëåçîáåòîí... Íà äàííûé ìîìåíò ñóùåñòâóåò íåñêîëüêî ÑÎÒÅÍ äîìèíèðóþùèõ øêîë ïî èêåáàíå è ÒÛÑß×È ìåíåå çíà÷èòåëüíûõ... È èêåáàíà óæå äàâíî âûøëà çà ðàìêè òðàäèöèîííîãî èñïîëüçîâàíèÿ öâåòîâ - â ñîâðåìåííûõ øêîëàõ èêåáàíó äåëàþò èç ëþáûõ ïîäðó÷íûõ ìàòåðèàëîâ, áóäü òî êóñîê ãàìíà èëè àðìàòóðà... Íî íè îäíà øêîëà íå íàðóøàåò áàçîâîãî çàêîíà, íà êîòîðîì çèæäåòñÿ âñÿ èäåÿ èêåáàíû è ïðè íàðóøåíèè êîòîðîãî èêåáàíîé êîíå÷íûé ïðîäóêò íàçûâàòüñÿ óæå íå ìîæåò... Êîìïîçèöèÿ îáÿçàíà ñîñòîÿòü èç ñåìè "âåòâåé" - òðåõ îñíîâíûõ è ÷åòûðåõ âñïîìîãàòåëüíûõ... Òðè îñíîâíûå âåòâè ñèìâîëèçèðóþò ÷åëîâåêà, Íåáî è Çåìëþ è ñâÿçü ìåæäó íèìè... Ôèëîñîôèÿ ìèíèìàëèçìà ïðèøëà èç äçåíà (ýòî ê âîïðîñó î õàéêó, èáî èêåáàíà ïîÿâèëàñü ðàíüøå) è ïîâëèÿëà íà ìíîãèå àñïåêòû ÿïîíñêîé êóëüòóðû... Íî îá ýòîì ìîæíî ìíîãî ðàññêàçûâàòü, ó ìåíÿ è òàê ïàëåö óæå ñâåëî - ñ òåëåôîíà )
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 03:24 
Êðàñíîäàð
Ãèòàðà, ýëåêòðîãèòàðà.

Poltergeist, ^__^ :jap:
I know nobody knows
Where it comes and where it goes
I know it's everybody's sin
You got to lose to know how to win (ñ) ♫Aerosmith♫
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 03:26 



:super:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 21:11 



Çëûå èíòðèãè:
Íàñ îêðóæàþò âðàãè,
Îáðûâ çà ñïèíîé...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 22:59 

Òðåóãîëüíèê ̸áèóñà

Áîðüáû ïîä êîâðîì
Èçó÷àéòå èñêóññòâî.
Îïåðåæàéòå.

Èíòðèãè íàçàä
Áóìåðàíãîì âåðíóòñÿ
Ñìåòàÿ âðàãîâ.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 23.09.2008 23:37 



Òåìíååò â ãëàçàõ -
Ìíîæåñòâî ðàí ñìåðòåëüíûõ.
Çà íàñ îòîìñòÿò.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 25.09.2008 16:20 



Ìû ïèëè ñàêý.
Ìåòàëè áóìåðàíãè.
Âåðíóëñÿ îäèí...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 12:00 



Âåðíóëñÿ îäèí
Çàõîòåëîñü áûòü âîëüíûì
Îò ìíèìûõ äðóçåé
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 12:08 



Ê êîìó âåðíóòüñÿ
Áóìåðàíã íå âûáèðàë -
Äîñòàëîñü ìíîãèì...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 16:55 

Òðåóãîëüíèê ̸áèóñà

Ó÷èòåñü êèäàòü
Áóìåðàíãè òî÷íåå!
Ïðèìåð: Ðîáåðò Âóä.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 17:05 



Âîäêà, óøàíêà,
Áóìåðàíã, áàëàëàéêà -
Íàøå íàñëåäñòâî! :idea2:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 17:21 

Òðåóãîëüíèê ̸áèóñà

Ñûãðàåì íà íèõ
Ïåñíþ êàíòðè ëèõóþ.
Çàïàä îãëîõíåò :D
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 26.09.2008 17:40 



Òàê ïðèêîëüí¸ìñÿ
Ëþ-ëè, ëþ-ëè ïî êàíòðè -
Áóø ïðîñëåçèòñÿ!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2008 01:12 



Êàðà íàñòèãíåò
Ìîøåííèêà õèòðîãî
Îãíåííûì äæåäîì!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 27.09.2008 01:16 
ìîñêâà
óäàðíûå

íà ñîâåùàíèè íà÷àëüíèêà ñëóøàë...
÷òî îí òàì íåñ, íå ïîíÿë,
íî âèä óìíûé âñå æå ñäåëàë
ask the dust
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 05.10.2008 11:16 



Îñåíü ïðèõîäèò
Íè÷åãî íå îñòàëîñü
Òîëüêî óñòàëîñòü
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 08.10.2008 00:18 



È ðàçðóøàòüñÿ
Ïîðîé íåîáõîäèìî,
×òîá âîçðîäèòüñÿ
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 09.10.2008 21:08 



Êîòèê çàïëàêàë.
Ïðóòüÿ ó êëåòêè êðåïêè.
Ãàäêàÿ ïòèöà!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 09.10.2008 21:18 

Òðåóãîëüíèê ̸áèóñà

Âçÿë êîò íîæîâêó
 ïóõëûå ëàïêè ñâîè.
Áóäåò áóëüîí÷èê.
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 09.10.2008 21:56 



Ïîíÿë ÷óòü ïîçæå -
Æèçíü åìó ñîõðàíèëè
Êðåïêèå ïðóòüÿ
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 14.10.2008 16:16 



Â÷åðà ìû ñíîâà
Ñ Ëîðîé êóøàëè ñóøè
Íåïðåíóæä¸ííî...
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: Ïèøåì (ïûòàåìñÿ) ÕÎÊÊÓ
Âðåìÿ: 14.10.2008 18:29 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

Íîæ ñàìóðàÿ îñò¸ð
Ñýíñýé ïîêàçàë õàðàêèðè
Íî íå ñêàçàë - áåñêîíòàêòíî


Íåò êèìîíî è ìå÷à
Ïîìíþ ââàëèëèñü ìû ê ãåéøàì
Êðåïêîå áûëî ñàêý
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!