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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 09.01.2008 12:30 



Äà ïóñòü çàíèìàþòñÿ, èì íèêòî íå çàïðåùàåò, íî ïîíÿòèå ãðàíæ óæå â ïëàíå ìóç÷êè èñ÷åðïàíî ïîëíîñòüþ...Íè÷åãî íîâîãî â ìóçûêå íå ïðèäóìàòü, ÷òî íå âîçüìè, ëþáîé ðèô áóäåò íèðâàíîâñêèì èëè ÷üèì íèòü å¸å, åäèíñòâåííîå ÷åì ìîæíî âçÿòü ãðàíæ ýòî òåêñòàìè, îðèãèíàëüíûìè, åäêèìè, íåðâíûìè, à òåêñòû äàííîé ãðóïïû ïóñòû...Ìíå ïîíðàâèëèñü âû, åñëè çàêðûòü ãëàçà òî ÷òî âû êëîíû, ìóçûêà - ãóä, âîêàë òîæ, íî êîãäà îòêðûûâàåøü ãëàçà è ïîíèìàåøü ÷òî "ãäå òî ÿ ýòî óæå ñëûøàë ýäàê ðàç äâàäöàòü", òî ñðàçó çàáûâàåøü ïðî âîêàë, ìóçûêó è î÷åíèâàåøü ÒÅÊÑÒ...Âîò.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 09.01.2008 16:25 



>íå ñëóøàë


:sm001:
ҳ̸Ҳ̸ҳҳ̸ :tual: ̸ҳҳ̸Ҳ̸ҳ
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:01 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

[SiC], è ìíîãî ëè òû òåêñòîâ îöåíèë, î âåëèêèé êðèòèê? ×òî òû âûíåñ èç íàøèõ òåêñòîâ? Äà, è êàê ìíîãî ÒÛ èõ íàïèñàë, åäêèõ, áüþùèõ â òî÷êó?

Obsession

Feel hot trembling of my colds
All my work without result
My eternity - your fault
Entertainment for adults

Never touch my pulsing sore
Plastic drips on my forehead
Stranger on the thirteenth floor
I'm not afraid, I'll go ahead

I will hide you in my rhymes
I Think I'll never steal again
Day of Angst - my lulling time
I can't suffer & not complain.

Ýòî ïóñòî, êðèòèê?
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:06 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

Ýòà ïåñíÿ ïîñâÿùåíà àìåðèêàíñêîé ïåâèöå Äåáîðå Ðýéíîëüäñ, ïåâèöå ñî ñòðàííûì äåôåêòîì ðå÷è - îíà íå ïåðåñòàâàëà çàèêàòüñÿ, äàæå êîãäà ïåëà (çàèêè âî âðåìÿ ïåíèÿ íå çàèêàþòñÿ).

Deborah

Sing Debbie sing,
Stamm'r as long as you can,
Jump thru my ring
And I will chain you again
You will never, you will never cry.
You will never, you will never cry.

Deborah!

Motley like a clown
You will lay on the scene.
Saliva's melted down -
Now you're warm, you can sing.
You will never, you will never die.
You will never, you will never die.

Deborah!
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:10 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

QUEEN OF BLUNTNESS

Please feed me up with your ground
Comedians look through the crowd
Tryin' to mend your crippled soul
Your penetration hotter than coals

My queen of bluntness
My secret goddess

Look through my ulcer - it's opened again
Don't give me your money - I'm OK
I'm your child I need my womb
You're my sky. See you in tomb
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:13 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

CUM TOGETHER (WHORE'S LATITUDES)

I dove in my urine
I know how fish feels like
I'll never will be clean
I've never had to lie

I don't wanna be your god!
Lipstick on my cock!

Your coffin in his bed
Will show you how to love
I'll never will be sad
I was never had to laugh
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:14 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

USELESS

I have no chance
It's my happy ending
No time for trance
Because you're always pretending!!!

I can't decide
My name is Outsider

I've blessed your God
He perceived my Truth
Take my anti-dote
Take my Forbidden Fruit!!!

Close your eyes - it's so scary!
No more lies! I'm Unnecessary! Yeah!
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:18 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

FROM THE SUN

Where's my place to sit?
Are you tired to lead?
Take my greatest gift - shit
Shit!!!

I'm your big mistake
Troubles, I can make
Ancestral headache - fake
Fake!!!

So, you're right again
Love is dried up stain
Somethin' in my vein - rain
Rain!!!


[SiC], ýòî ÿ òàê, ÷òîá òû íå áûë ãîëîñëîâåí. Âåðîÿòíî íå âñå çíàþò àíãëèéñêèé, òàê æå êàê è òû. Èìåíííî ïîýòîìó ÿ äàì âîçìîæíîñòü è îñòàëüíûì îáñóäèòü/îñóäèòü ìîè ñòèõè. Âîò ëèøü íåêîòîðûå èç íèõ. Çàõîòèòå - ïîâåøó åùå.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 11.01.2008 01:36 



Äàâàé èøî, ìíå ïîíðàâ, èçâèíÿþñü çà ãîëîñëîâèå, ïðîñò ÿ íà çâóê àíãëèêöèé î÷ ïëîõî âîñïðèíèìàþ)Ñêîê ÿ òåêñòîâ íàïèñàë òû çíàåøü :)
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 15.01.2008 16:00 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

Çíàþ???
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 01:34 



MikeWilson, äâà áàëëà çà èíãëèøü!!! è ñåìü çà òåêñû âöåëîì :golod06:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 03:15 



ìíå âîò ýòà îñîáåííî ïîíðàâèëàñü, õîòÿ ÿ íå ÷èòàë âñ¸

CUM TOGETHER (WHORE'S LATITUDES)

I dove in my urine
I know how fish feels like
I'll never will be clean
I've never had to lie

I don't wanna be your god!
Lipstick on my cock!

Your coffin in his bed
Will show you how to love
I'll never will be sad
I was never had to laugh

ÈÒÀÊ, ïðîøâûðí¸ìñÿ ïî ãðàììàòèêå :ulyb:
_______________________________

>*I dove in my urine -

- íàñêîëüêî ÿ ïîìíþ ãëàãîë DIVE - ãëàãîë ïðàâèëüíûé! õîòÿ õ.ç. ó íåãî åñòü è ôîðìà DOVE, íî òÿíåòñÿ îíà êàê àòòîâèçì ñ Øåêñïèðîâñêèõ âðåì¸í. Ïðàâèëüíåé áûëî áû òàê:
I dived into my urine :idea2: , à òî ïîëó÷àåòñÿ "ß ãîëóáü â ñâîåé ìî÷å" :7:
çû: ïî÷åìó "into" à íå "in"? - ìíîãî ïèñàòü, ëåíü...

>*I know how fish feels like

- ìîæíî ïðèäðàöî, íî ïîõ, ïîéä¸ò..

>*I'll never will be clean

- I'll - ñîêðàùåííàÿ ôîðìà îò I will !!! òåïåðü ñìîòðè ÷¸ ïîëó÷àåòñÿ:
I will never will be clean - íó òû ïîíÿë êàðî÷å :7:

>*I've never had to lie

- à òóò åù¸ êðó÷å... I've = I have !!!
÷òî ïîëó÷àåòñÿ:
I have never had to lie - BRAVO :appl:


>I don't wanna be your god!
>Lipstick on my cock!

>Your coffin in his bed
>Will show you how to love

>I'll never will be sad

- ñì. >*I'll never will be clean

>I was never had to laugh

- à âîò ýòî âàùå â ìåìîðèç!!! :lool:

_______________________________

Òåïåðü ïîãîâîðèì î ñìûñëå ïåñíè âöåëîì :idea2: Åñëè ÷åñòíî, òî ÿ íå óâèäåë íèêàêîãî ñêðûòîãî ñìûñëà è òåì áîëåå "ïîäòåêñà". Ïîýòîìó ïåðåâåäó êàê åñòü :4:

ÊÎÍ×ÀÅÌ ÂÌÅÑÒÅ (ØËÞØÍÈ×ÅÑÒÎ èëè ÒÎ ×Î ÏÎÇÂÎËÅÍÎ ØËÞÕÅ)

ß íûðíóë â ñâîþ ìî÷ó
ß çíàþ ÷òî ÷óâñòâóþò ðûáû
ß íèêîãäà íå áóäó ÷èñòûì
Ìíå íèêîãäà íå íóæíî áûëî âðàòü

ß íå õî÷ó áûòü òâîèì Áîãîì
Ïàìàäà íà ìî¸ì êóå! :dur_486:

Òâîé ãðîá â åãî êðîâàòè
Ïîêàæåò òåáå êàê ëþáèòü
Ìíå íèêîãäà íå áóäåò ãðóñòíî
Ìíå íèêîãäà íå íóæíî áûëî ñìåÿòüñÿ

______________________________________
________

Ýïèêðèç:
ñëóøàé ìåíüøå ÍÈÐÂÀÍÛ ÷óâàê è áóäåò òåáå ñ÷àñòüå :idea2:
Ïîòàìóøòà òàêèå ñëîâà êàê URINE, FISH, WHORE èòä â ñêðîìíîé êîìïèëÿöèè ñâîéñòâåíû Êóðòó :pardon: ß ñðàçó çàïàëèë íåëàäíîå!
Äà è íàä ãðàììàòèêîé íå ìåøàëî áû ïîðàáîòàòü :idea2:


:hat:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 10:13 



¨, :eek:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 17:06 



> Âåðîÿòíî íå âñå çíàþò àíãëèéñêèé, òàê æå êàê è òû. Èìåíííî ïîýòîìó ÿ äàì âîçìîæíîñòü è îñòàëüíûì îáñóäèòü/îñóäèòü ìîè ñòèõè. Âîò ëèøü íåêîòîðûå èç íèõ. Çàõîòèòå - ïîâåøó åùå.

Àâòîð, äàâàé ûøî :idea2: :golod06:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 19:19 



¨, ÿ òîæå òàê õî÷ó! :sm5:

FROM THE SUN

Where's my place to sit?
Are you tired to lead?
Take my greatest gift - shit
Shit!!!

I'm your big mistake
Troubles, I can make
Ancestral headache - fake
Fake!!!

So, you're right again
Love is dried up stain
Somethin' in my vein - rain
Rain!!!


\\\\Ãðàììàòèêà â öåëîì ñîáëþäåíà.
\\\\Òåïåðü ïåðåâîä:


Îò ñîëíöà

Ãäå ìîå ìåñòî, ÷òîáû ñåñòü?
Òû óñòàë ðóêîâîäèòü?
Âîçüìè ìîé âåëè÷àéøèé äàð - äåðüìî
Äåðüìî!

ß - òâîÿ áîëüøàÿ îøèáêà.
Ïðîáëåìû, êîòîðûå ÿ ìîãó ñîçäàòü.
Íàñëåäñòâåííàÿ ãîëîâíàÿ áîëü - ôàëüøèâêà.
Ôàëüøèâêà!

Èòàê, òû ïðàâ îïÿòü.
Ëþáîâü - âûñóøåííîå ïÿòíî.
×òî-òî â ìîèõ âåíàõ - äîæäü.
Äîæäü!

\\\\Òàêæå íè ïîäòåêñòîâ, íè÷åãî. Êîáýéíó òàêèå òåêñòû ïðèäàâàëè øàðì. Òóò ìíå íàïîìèíàåò ýêñïåðèìåíòàëüíûå þíîøåñêèå ñòèõè, íàïèñàííûå â íàðêîìàíñêîì áðåäó. Êàê-òî òàê... :7:
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 21:28 



G#HeaD, äåðæè êðàáà :agree:


> Êîáýéíó òàêèå òåêñòû ïðèäàâàëè øàðì.

Òóò Êîáåéíîì äàæ è íå ïàõíåò áëèçêî :lool:
Ó íåãî òåêñòû áûëè ïîñòðîåíû èñêëþ÷èòåëüíî íà èäèîìàõ èëè íà âçàèìîèñêëþ÷åíèÿõ è ïðîòèâîðå÷èÿõ, ÷òî â ñâîþ î÷åðåäü è "ïîäñò¸ãèâàëî" :idea2: À òóò ïðîñòî íàáîð ñëîâ è ôðàç, êîòîðûå ìåæäó ñîáîé ðèôìóþòñÿ :4: ÍÅ ÁÎËÜØÅ :ukur:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 21:32 



ÿ ïîñëóøàë, êñòàòå :dur_486:
íå Íèðâàíà ýòî! :dont: À ñìåñü Ïàäë îô ìàä, Áóøà è Íèðâàíû ÈÌÕÎ :golod06:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 21:44 



¨, :agree: :hat:

Íàøå äåëî ïðàâîå!

>Òóò Êîáåéíîì äàæ è íå ïàõíåò áëèçêî :lool:
>Ó íåãî òåêñòû áûëè ïîñòðîåíû èñêëþ÷èòåëüíî íà èäèîìàõ èëè íà âçàèìîèñêëþ÷åíèÿõ è ïðîòèâîðå÷èÿõ, ÷òî â ñâîþ î÷åðåäü è "ïîäñò¸ãèâàëî" :idea2:

Ó ìåíÿ âûçûâàþò ïðîòèâîðå÷èâûå ÷óâñòâà òåêñòû Êîáýéíà. Ñîãëàøóñü, ìíîãî ó íåãî èäèîì, ïðîòèâîðå÷èé... Ñàìà õàðèçìà Êóðòà ñûãðàëà ñâîþ ðîëü.

> À òóò ïðîñòî íàáîð ñëîâ è ôðàç, êîòîðûå ìåæäó ñîáîé ðèôìóþòñÿ >:4: ÍÅ ÁÎËÜØÅ :ukur:

Î òîì è ðå÷ü. Âèäèìî, àâòîð ðåøèë, åñëè íà àíãëèéñêîì - òî ïðîêàòèò :lool:
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 21:45 



>À ñìåñü Ïàäë îô ìàä, Áóøà è Íèðâàíû
òè çàáûë êîðîëÿ è øóòà :sol:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 20.01.2008 21:45 



>ÿ ïîñëóøàë, êñòàòå
>íå Íèðâàíà ýòî! À ñìåñü Ïàäë îô ìàä, Áóøà è Íèðâàíû ÈÌÕÎ

Ñîãëàñåí. Íè÷å òàê ìóçîí, íî íå öåïëÿåò. :cowboy:
Àâòîð
Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 02:23 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

>ìíå âîò ýòà îñîáåííî ïîíðàâèëàñü, õîòÿ ÿ íå ÷èòàë âñ¸
>
>CUM TOGETHER (WHORE'S LATITUDES)
>
>I dove in my urine
>I know how fish feels like
>I'll never will be clean
>I've never had to lie
>
>I don't wanna be your god!
>Lipstick on my cock!
>
>Your coffin in his bed
>Will show you how to love
>I'll never will be sad
>I was never had to laugh
>
>ÈÒÀÊ, ïðîøâûðí¸ìñÿ ïî ãðàììàòèêå
>_______________________________
>
>>*I dove in my urine -
>
>- íàñêîëüêî ÿ ïîìíþ ãëàãîë DIVE - ãëàãîë ïðàâèëüíûé! õîòÿ õ.ç. ó íåãî åñòü è ôîðìà DOVE, íî òÿíåòñÿ îíà êàê àòòîâèçì ñ Øåêñïèðîâñêèõ âðåì¸í. Ïðàâèëüíåé áûëî áû òàê:
>I dived into my urine , à òî ïîëó÷àåòñÿ "ß ãîëóáü â ñâîåé ìî÷å"
>çû: ïî÷åìó "into" à íå "in"? - ìíîãî ïèñàòü, ëåíü...
>
>>*I know how fish feels like
>
>- ìîæíî ïðèäðàöî, íî ïîõ, ïîéä¸ò..
>
>>*I'll never will be clean
>
>- I'll - ñîêðàùåííàÿ ôîðìà îò I will !!! òåïåðü ñìîòðè ÷¸ ïîëó÷àåòñÿ:
>I will never will be clean - íó òû ïîíÿë êàðî÷å
>
>>*I've never had to lie
>
>- à òóò åù¸ êðó÷å... I've = I have !!!
>÷òî ïîëó÷àåòñÿ:
>I have never had to lie - BRAVO
>
>
>>I don't wanna be your god!
>>Lipstick on my cock!
>
>>Your coffin in his bed
>>Will show you how to love
>
>>I'll never will be sad
>
>- ñì. >*I'll never will be clean
>
>>I was never had to laugh
>
>- à âîò ýòî âàùå â ìåìîðèç!!!
>
>_______________________________
>
>Òåïåðü ïîãîâîðèì î ñìûñëå ïåñíè âöåëîì Åñëè ÷åñòíî, òî ÿ íå óâèäåë íèêàêîãî ñêðûòîãî ñìûñëà è òåì áîëåå "ïîäòåêñà". Ïîýòîìó ïåðåâåäó êàê åñòü
>
>ÊÎÍ×ÀÅÌ ÂÌÅÑÒÅ (ØËÞØÍÈ×ÅÑÒÎ èëè ÒÎ ×Î ÏÎÇÂÎËÅÍÎ ØËÞÕÅ)
>
>ß íûðíóë â ñâîþ ìî÷ó
>ß çíàþ ÷òî ÷óâñòâóþò ðûáû
>ß íèêîãäà íå áóäó ÷èñòûì
>Ìíå íèêîãäà íå íóæíî áûëî âðàòü
>
>ß íå õî÷ó áûòü òâîèì Áîãîì
>Ïàìàäà íà ìî¸ì êóå!
>
>Òâîé ãðîá â åãî êðîâàòè
>Ïîêàæåò òåáå êàê ëþáèòü
>Ìíå íèêîãäà íå áóäåò ãðóñòíî
>Ìíå íèêîãäà íå íóæíî áûëî ñìåÿòüñÿ
>
>____________________________________
__

>________
>
>Ýïèêðèç:
>ñëóøàé ìåíüøå ÍÈÐÂÀÍÛ ÷óâàê è áóäåò òåáå ñ÷àñòüå
>Ïîòàìóøòà òàêèå ñëîâà êàê URINE, FISH, WHORE èòä â ñêðîìíîé êîìïèëÿöèè ñâîéñòâåíû Êóðòó ß ñðàçó çàïàëèë íåëàäíîå!
>Äà è íàä ãðàììàòèêîé íå ìåøàëî áû ïîðàáîòàòü



Êîðî÷å, ïåðåïðîéäåìñÿ åùå ðàç: Dive - ãëàãîë, âñå-òàêè, íåïðàâèëüíûé, ïîòîìó âñå âåðíî - êàìåíü â òâîé îãîðîä.
I'll never... - ÷åñòíî, îïèñÀëñÿ - êîíå÷íî æå "I'm..."! - êàìåíü â ìîé îãîðîä.
I've never had... I have had - ïðåâîñõîäíàÿ ôîðìà ãëàãîëà to have - íàïðèìåð, I have gone - ïðåâîñõîäíàÿ ôîðìà ãëàãîëà to go...íó, äóìàþ ïîíÿë, íå äóðàê, ó÷è ôîðìû è áóäåò òåáå ñ÷àñòüå.=) òà æå ñàìàÿ èñòîðèÿ è â ïîñëåäíåé ñòðî÷êå, íå çíàþ ïî÷åìó íàïèñàë ñ îøèáêîé, íî, â êîíöå êîíöîâ, ìû æå è â ðóññêîì èíîãäà îøèáàåìñÿ, õîòÿ çíàåì âåäü, êàê ïðàâèëüíî.

Íàçâàíèå - ñòåá íàä THE BEATLES è THE DOORS: COME TOGETHER (HORSE LATITUDES) - îäèíàêîâî çâó÷èò, íî ïî-äðóãîìó íàïèñàíî - ñîâåðøåííî äðóãîå çíà÷åíèå. Ïîäðàçóìåâàëîñü, êàê øóòêà, ïðîñòè, ïîëó÷èëîñü íå äëÿ âñåõ.=)

Ç.Û.: ïîñëå êîáýéíà ÿ åùå äîëæåí âûáèðàòü ñëîâà äëÿ ñòèõîâ? íó óæ äóäêè!!! ß 6ëÿ èõ íå ýëåêòðîííûì ïåðåâîä÷èêîì ïåðåâîæó è íå ó áîìáèêà ñòðî÷êè âûäåðãèâàþ!

Äà, ñëîâî "àòòîâèçì" ïèøåòñÿ êàê "ÀÒÀÂÈÇÌ", åñëè ÿ íå îøèáàþñü;)
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2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

èçâèíè, íå ïðåâîñõîäíàÿ ôîðìà, à èìåëîñü ââèäó progressive, êîíå÷íî æå - áûâàåò.=) Òî åñòü, to have + òðåòüÿ ôîðìà ãëàãîëà.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 02:47 
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2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

>¨,
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>Íàøå äåëî ïðàâîå!
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>>Òóò Êîáåéíîì äàæ è íå ïàõíåò áëèçêî
>>Ó íåãî òåêñòû áûëè ïîñòðîåíû èñêëþ÷èòåëüíî íà èäèîìàõ èëè íà âçàèìîèñêëþ÷åíèÿõ è ïðîòèâîðå÷èÿõ, ÷òî â ñâîþ î÷åðåäü è "ïîäñò¸ãèâàëî"
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>Ó ìåíÿ âûçûâàþò ïðîòèâîðå÷èâûå ÷óâñòâà òåêñòû Êîáýéíà. Ñîãëàøóñü, ìíîãî ó íåãî èäèîì, ïðîòèâîðå÷èé... Ñàìà õàðèçìà Êóðòà ñûãðàëà ñâîþ ðîëü.
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>> À òóò ïðîñòî íàáîð ñëîâ è ôðàç, êîòîðûå ìåæäó ñîáîé ðèôìóþòñÿ >:4: ÍÅ ÁÎËÜØÅ
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>Î òîì è ðå÷ü. Âèäèìî, àâòîð ðåøèë, åñëè íà àíãëèéñêîì - òî ïðîêàòèò


À âîò òóò, ðåáÿòóøêè, èäèòå â ïN3äó. Àâòîð íè÷åãî íå ðåøèë! Òàêèå êàê âû äàæå ïîêîéíîìó Êîáýéíó ãîòîâû æîïó äî áëåñêà ëèçàòü!!! "Êîáýéíó òàêèå òåêñòû ïðèäàâàëè øàðì..." Ñó|<à, åñëè áû ýòî Áîìáåéí íàïèñàë - îíî-òî êîíå÷íî, ýòî æå ÑÀÌ! À òóò - êàêîé-òî íèêîìó íåèçâåñòíûé çàòåñàëñÿ... À âåäü íè îäèí èç âàñ íèêîãäà íå ÷èòàë Áóêîâñêè! Âû âåäü ïîíÿòèÿ íå èìååòå î òîì, ÷òî òàêîå - ïèñàòü ñòèõè. ß íè÷åãî íå ðèôìóþ! Èç ìåíÿ ÂÎÒ ÝÒÎ ïðåò. Äà, êñòàòè, Êàê-òåáÿ-òàì...HeaD - òû ïðîñòî ëîõ - ïåðåâîäèòü ñòèõè ïååâîä÷èêîì... Òû ëó÷øå ïîñèæèâàé äîìà è ïîïèëèâàé íà ñâîåé Flying V è ÍÈÊÎÃÄÀ áîëüøå íå ïåðåâîäè. Ó ¨ áûëà ÊÎÍÑÒÐÓÊÒÈÂÍÀß ÊÐÈÒÈÊÀ, à ó òåáÿ - ïîïûòêà îáëèòü äåðüìîì, òîëüêî çà÷åì?

"Ëèðèêà Êîáýéíà âûçûâàëà ó ìåíÿ ïðîòèâîðå÷èâûå ÷óâòâà..." - ïðîñòî ÑÍÎÁÈÇÌ! Êàêèå ÷óâñòâà ó òåáÿ âûçûâàëà åãî ëèðèêà? Ñêàæåì. êàêèå ÷óâñòâà ó òåáÿ âûçûâàëà ïåñíÿ, ñêàæåì, MEXICAN SEAFOOD? Î äà, ïðîñòè - ÏÐÎÒÈÂÎÐÅ×ÈÂÛÅ!


Äà, äðóçüÿ, òóò Êîáýéíîì è íå ïàõíåò. Êàê è ó Âîçíåñåíñêîãî íèêîãäà íå ïàõëî Ìàÿêîâñêèì! È ïî.õå.ð íà âûñîêèå ñðàâíåíèÿ!!!
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 07:05 

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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 17:39 



>Äà, êñòàòè, Êàê-òåáÿ-òàì...HeaD - òû ïðîñòî ëîõ - ïåðåâîäèòü ñòèõè ïååâîä÷èêîì... Òû ëó÷øå ïîñèæèâàé äîìà è ïîïèëèâàé íà ñâîåé Flying V è ÍÈÊÎÃÄÀ áîëüøå íå ïåðåâîäè. Ó ¨ áûëà ÊÎÍÑÒÐÓÊÒÈÂÍÀß ÊÐÈÒÈÊÀ, à ó òåáÿ - ïîïûòêà îáëèòü äåðüìîì, òîëüêî çà÷åì?

Ñàì ëîõ. Ýòî ðàç.
Ýòî íå ïåðåâîä÷èê, à äîñëîâíûé ïåðåâîä. Ðàçíèöà åñòü. Ýòî äâà.
Ãäå ìíå ïîñèæûâàòü è ÷å ïîïèëèâàòü - ñàì ðàçáåðóñü. Ýòî òðè.
Ïîïûòêè îáëèâàòü äåðüìîì - ýòî òû ñàì òàê ðåøèë. Ìîå ìíåíèå - ýòî ìîå ìíåíèå, è åñëè îíî íå òàêîå, êàê íðàâèòñÿ òåáå - èçâèíè. Íå íàäî ïîíèìàòü âñå ïðåâðàòíî. Ýòî ÷åòûðå.

>"Ëèðèêà Êîáýéíà âûçûâàëà ó ìåíÿ ïðîòèâîðå÷èâûå ÷óâòâà..." - ïðîñòî ÑÍÎÁÈÇÌ! Êàêèå ÷óâñòâà ó òåáÿ âûçûâàëà åãî ëèðèêà? Ñêàæåì. êàêèå ÷óâñòâà ó òåáÿ âûçûâàëà ïåñíÿ, ñêàæåì, MEXICAN SEAFOOD? Î äà, ïðîñòè - ÏÐÎÒÈÂÎÐÅ×ÈÂÛÅ!

Òû íåïðàâèëüíî òðàêòóåøü ñìûñë ñëîâà "ñíîáèçì". Ýòî ïÿòü.
Òâîÿ èðîíèÿ èñõîäèò îò òîãî, ÷òî òåáå êàæåòñÿ, ÷òî òåáÿ îïóñòèëè. Ýòî øåñòü.
ß íàïèñàë òå ÷óâñòâà, êîòîðûå ó ìåíÿ âûçûâàåò ïðîñëóøèâàíèå Íèðâàíû. Îíè òàêîâû, è ÿ íàïèñàë òî, ÷òî äóìàþ. Ëüñòèòü íå óìåþ. Ýòî ñåìü.

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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 19:22 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

>Òû íåïðàâèëüíî òðàêòóåøü ñìûñë ñëîâà "ñíîáèçì"

Ñîìåðñåò Ìîýì. Îñòðèå áðèòâû.
...òàê ãîâîðÿò î ÷åëîâåêå (ñíîáå), ïðåòåíäóþùåì íà èçûñêàííî-óòîí÷¸ííûé âêóñ... - Äóìàþ, ÷òî ïðàâèëüíî òðàêòóþ. Ñíîáèçì ìíîãîãðàíåí è îí íå òîëüêî î ñòðåìëåíèè êàçàòüñÿ âûñîêîñâåòñêîé îñîáîé ïðè ïðîèñõîæäåíèè ÷åëîâåêà èç íèçîâ.
È ìîÿ èðîíèÿ íå îñíîâàíà íà îùóùåíèè òîãî, ÷òî ìåíÿ îïóñòèëè. Òû, âñåãî ëèøü, ïîïûòàëñÿ, íå ïîíèìàþ - çà÷åì. Âìåñòî òîãî, ÷òîá èñïðàæíÿòüñÿ, ëó÷øå, â ïðîòèâîâåñ ìîèì ïëîõèì ñòèõàì, âåøàé ñâîè õîðîøèå.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 21:20 



MikeWilson, Âèêèïåäèþ ñìîòðåë?

Òàì æå: "Ñóùåñòâóåò îïðåäåëåíèå ïîíÿòèÿ ñíîá, êàê ïóñòîé, îãðàíè÷åíûé ÷åëîâåê, óâëåêàþùèéñÿ âíåøíèì ëîñêîì, îäíàêî òàêîå îïðåäåëåíèå íåâåðíî."


>È ìîÿ èðîíèÿ íå îñíîâàíà íà îùóùåíèè òîãî, ÷òî ìåíÿ îïóñòèëè. Òû, âñåãî ëèøü, ïîïûòàëñÿ, íå ïîíèìàþ - çà÷åì.

Äà íå ïûòàëñÿ. Ïðîñòî âûñêàçàëñÿ. Îòëè÷àé, ïîæàëóéñòà, ñàðêàçì îò òî÷êè çðåíèÿ. ß íè÷åãî íå èìåþ ïðîòèâ òâîåãî òâîð÷åñòâà. Äåëàé ÷òî õî÷åøü. Íî ìîå ìíåíèå - ýòî ìîå ìíåíèå. Âåðíî?


>Âìåñòî òîãî, ÷òîá èñïðàæíÿòüñÿ, ëó÷øå, â ïðîòèâîâåñ ìîèì ïëîõèì ñòèõàì, âåøàé ñâîè õîðîøèå.

Ïðè÷åì çäåñü ìîè ñòèõè? Ìíåíèå - åñòü ìíåíèå. Îíî ñóáúåêòèâíî. ß ìîãó áûòü è íå ïðàâ - ðàäè áîãà. :cowboy:

Íå ìîæåò æå àáñîëþòíî âñåì âñå íðàâèòñÿ? :4:
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 22:28 



MikeWilson, è äåéñòâèòåëüíî ãëàãîë DIVE - íåïðàâèëüíûé :idea2: . Ñìóòèëà åãî 2-ÿ ôîðìà (past simpe) DIVED! Âîò ÿ è ïîäóìàë, ÷òî ýòî îäíèí èç òåõ ãëàãîëîâ, êîòîðûå ñî âðåìåíåì ñòàëè ïðàâèëüíûìè. Ïðîñòî â ñâî¸ âðåìÿ ïðèøëîñü ïî÷èòàòü Øåêñïèðà & Co â îðèãèíàëå - ææåñòü ,êñòàòå, :lol: - íå ñîâåòóþ!!!
Ñëîâèë íàêó, íå ñïîðþ))), íî âñ¸æ ïðàâèëüíåé áûëî áû dove into.., à íå dove in.., âåðü ìíå ÷óâàê :idea2:

×òî êàñàåöî "I've never had to lie" - âîò òóò íå ñîãëàøóñü íèðàçó :dont: ))

"I've" - câèäåòåëüñòâóåò óæå î çàâåðøåííîì äåéñòâèè! Íó íàïðèìåð:

"I've had it" - çàèïàëî
"I've done it already" - óæå äàâíî ñäåëàë
"What I've done" - ÷òî ÿ íàäåëàë

èòä...

à ó òåáÿ òóò âðåìÿ íàñòîÿùåå åñòü :idea2:
ïîýòîìó "I never had to lie" - áóäåò ïðàâèëüíî!)

MikeWilson, âåðü ìíå :-)
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 22:49 



>I'll never... - ÷åñòíî, îïèñÀëñÿ - êîíå÷íî æå "I'm..."! - êàìåíü â ìîé îãîðîä

íå ïîíÿë... :not:

I will never be clean
I will never be sad

êóäà òóò I'm :4:
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 22:56 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

Âîò ñìîòðè, ¨: ïðîñòî íàáðàë ïðîèçâîëüíî â ôîðåéí ïîèñêîâèêå have never had. Âîò ðåçóëüòàòû äëÿ ïðèìåðà:

1. We go there often and have never had a bad meal. John: January 14, 2008 ... When my wife complained to the manager, he told her that she has a bad attitude! ...

2. Tokyo's dogs have never had it so good Send to a friend Print .... She sees dogs’ elevated status as a reflection of the new, relaxed lifestyle in Japan. ...

3.I never had a pet ; now I have a cat. she is an indoor cat. I took

4.I have never had a baby before. I am worried how it is going to ..

Íó, äóìàþ, äîñòàòî÷íî. Ìîæåøü ñàì ïîïðîáîâàòü, äàæå íà ãóãëÿõ. À ÿ, ïðàâäà, òðè...íåò, ïî÷òè ÷åòûðå ãîäà ðàáîòàë ñ èíîñòðàìè.=) Èíîãäà, êîíå÷íî, ìîãó ëàæàòü, íî òóò âñå âåðíî.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 23:03 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

>>I'll never... - ÷åñòíî, îïèñÀëñÿ - êîíå÷íî æå "I'm..."! - êàìåíü â ìîé îãîðîä
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>íå ïîíÿë...
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>I will never be clean
>I will never be sad
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>êóäà òóò I'm


áëÿ! ýòî ÿ íàïèñàë? ïðîñòè! Lapse of reason!!! Ïðîñòî I - è âñ¸, êîíå÷íî!!!
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 23:13 



Mike, áëèí )) êàê ÿ óæå è îòïèñàë âûøå - çàâåðøåííîå äåéñòâèå â ïðîøëîì! Òîãäà êàíàåò, à èíà÷å - íèõò :idea2:
Òåáå íàäî íàó÷èòñÿ ÷óâñòâîâàòü âðåìåíà è èõ èçâðàùåíèÿ è èñêëþ÷åíèÿ! Èíãëèø òîêà íà ïåðâûé âçãëÿä êàæåòñÿ ïðîñòûì ÿçûêîì, íî íà ñàìîì äåëå... óâåðÿþ òåáÿ - ýòî ïðîñòî ææåñòü èáî ïðàâèë ìåíüøå ÷åì èñêëþ÷åíèé! ×òîá ïîíÿòü åãî è ãîâîðèòü íà í¸ì - íóæíî ïîæèòü â øòàòàõ, ÷èòàÿ êëàññèêó :idea2: Èíà÷å íèêàê )) Âîò ïî÷åìó ÿ òåáå è ïèøó ïåðèîäè÷åñêè "âåðü ìíå".
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 21.01.2008 23:26 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

Êîãäà ðàáîòàåøü òîëüêî ñ èíîñòðàìè (àâñòðàëàìè, àìåðèêîñàìè è îíãëå÷àíèíîì) íà ïðîòÿæåíèè äîëãîãî âðåìåíè â Ðîñèè ìîæíî íèêóäà íå âûåçæàòü. ß ïî-ðóññêè ðàçãîâàðèâàë ðàç â ìåñÿö òðè ìèíóòû ïî ñïóòíèêó. Êñòàòè, óæ åñëè æèë â Àìåðèêå, íàïðèìåð. òî äîëæåí çíàòü, ÷òî îíè ëþòî ïðåíåáðåãàþò ïðàâèëàìè. Íàïðèìåð òðåòüÿ ôîðìà ãëàãîëà - íàõ!! Âðåìåíà - ïîõ! Àíãëè÷àíèí ïðîñòî êîñÿ÷èë ïîñòîÿííî. Ñëàë ìíå ñýìýñêè è ñïðàøèâàë "Do I get this in cyrilic or arabic"!!! Òî åñòü îíè íå çíàþò, ÷òî ó íèõ àëôàâèò LATIN, à Arabic - ýòî öèôðû!!!=))) Èëè â êíèãàõ, íàïðèìåð ó Äýíà Áðàóíà â ïðåñëîâóòîì "The Da Vinci Code": "I felt myself like..." - to feel è to behave - èñêëþ÷åíèÿ è Myself íå èñïîëüçóåòñÿ, íî ýòî èãíîðèò àâòîð, èçâåñòíûé æóðíàëèñò, ÷üÿ êíèãà ðàñõîäèëàñü ìèëëèîííûìè òèðàæàìè. Äóìàþ, ìîæíî ñìåëî ïðåíåáðåãàòü ïðàâèëàìè.  ðóññêîì ìû ÷àùå îøèáàåìñÿ.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 22.01.2008 12:19 



>HeaD - òû ïðîñòî ëîõ

>Ñàì ëîõ.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 22.01.2008 13:46 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

¨, ñòóêíèñü â àñüêó, ïëç, èëè îñòàâü íîìåð. Ñ òîáîé èíòåðåñíî îáùàòüñÿ, òû íå ãîëîñëîâåí è óðàâíîâåøåí.=)
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2008 06:31 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

Linki ne gruzjacca.
Me mog by ty dat' rabochie linki?

spasibo.
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2008 12:50 



>ß ñíà÷àëà ïðî÷èòàëú ABREEGAN !
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2008 15:34 
Ñàíêò-Ïåòåðáóðã
2009 Custom RD Standard, 1984 Fernandes Stratocaster

Äà, íàäî ïåðåçàêà÷àòü, ïîêà òðàôôèêà íåò íà ïåðåçàëèâ. Ñ íîâîãî ôåâðàëÿ ïåðåçàëüþ îáÿçàòåëüíî è ñêèííó íîâûå ëèíêè. Èçâèíèòå çà íåóäîáñòâî.
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Òåìà: Re: ABERDEEN (grunge)
Âðåìÿ: 26.01.2008 17:31 
äåðåâíÿ Äåðåâÿííûé Ìîñò
áðÿêè, êðèêè

Äà, à ÷å òàêàÿ ëþáîâü ê êàì-òî èëèíêàì è ïðî÷ ôèãíå. Ïî÷åìó íå çàëèòü õîòÿ áû íà http://www.realmusic.ru/

Îíè êîíå÷íî ÷å-òî òàì âÿêàþò ïðî ïðàâà, òàê ÷òî ëó÷øå íå çàëèâàòü ìàñòåð-âåðñèè, êîòîðûå ìîãóò ïîéòè íà äèñêè.


Øîá 2 ðàçà íå âñòàâàòü. Ó ìíó åñòü íåñêîëüêî êàâåð-ïåðåâîäîâ Íèðâàíû. ("Êàâåð-ïåðåâîä", îäèíàêîâûé ïî ðàçìåðíîñòÿì, ðèòìèêå, è î÷ áëèçêèé ïî ñìûñëó, ïî÷òè äîñëîâíûé.)
Êîìó èíòåðåñíî ëåæàò òóò. http://www.stihi.ru/author.html?markmal
Ïðàâäà òàì âñå â ïåðåìåæêó ñ äðóãèìè ìîèìè ñòèõàìè.
“We act as though comfort and luxury were the chief
requirements of life, when all that we need to make us happy is
something to be enthusiastic about.”
Einstein
 ýòîò ôîðóì ìîãóò ïèñàòü òîëüêî çàðåãèñòðèðîâàííûå ïîëüçîâàòåëè!